Slime Rewrite Comic

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During October 2019, Chris posted his version of Ben Saint's Slime comic, changing it so that the events go the way he wants them to.

Summary

Context (events of Saint's comic pre-rewrite)

Strawberry Milk (left), Phantom Horn (right)

Strawberry Milk and Phantom Horn hide in a bush, watching Night Star meditate. Strawberry Milk says something too loud, which alerts Night Star to their presence, grabbing them. After a short conversation, Night Star sends the two into a portal to the unknown world of NLACakaNM (New Los Angeles City also known as Neo Milwaukee), where slime is the main commodity/currency. Night Star says that she will not bring the two back until they learn to stop trolling others.

A few violent yet unimportant things happen, and the two are later doused in slime as a result of someone being murdered around them (after a 9/11 joke). The slime causes a genetic modification in the two of them.

Chris' canon

Chris-Chan Sonichu arrives and teases Phantom Horn. Phantom Horn then produces a specimen of slime, which is given to Night Star.

Night Star does scientific testing on the slime, finding out that the slime dissolves in a mixture of sugar and sodium bicarbonate. The 3 characters bathe in the mix, and then more characters arrive and develop a torrential raincloud of the mixture, cleansing NLACakaNM of slime.

Comic pages

Chris Slime Comic
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