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Dodo Conservative: /* Mistakes */

2025-12-11T22:27:43Z

Mistakes

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	-He misspells and erroneously uses the infinitive form of ''incluir''.		-He misspells and erroneously uses the infinitive form of ''incluir''.

	-He uses ''llama'' as the translation for "name". Anyone who has been to one day at a Spanish class likely knows that ''llama'' is a verb and means ''call'', while the correct word would be ''nombre''. It is to be noted that ''llamar'' is a pronominal verb and, as such, can be conjugated in reflexive form; Spanish speakers often use this form to introduce themselves or other people (e.g., ''Él se llama Ricardo'', lit. "He calls himself Ricardo", as opposed to the common English construct, "His name is Ricardo"). This is likely the origin of Chris's confusion. Furthermore, if ''llama'' were a noun, it would be feminine and take the article ''la''.		-He uses ''llama'' as the translation for "name". Anyone who has been to one day at a Spanish class likely knows that ''llama'' is a verb and means ''call'', while the correct word would be ''nombre''. ''Llama'' as a noun means [[2014 house fire\|flame]]. It is to be noted that ''llamar'' is a pronominal verb and, as such, can be conjugated in reflexive form; Spanish speakers often use this form to introduce themselves or other people (e.g., ''Él se llama Ricardo'', lit. "He calls himself Ricardo", as opposed to the common English construct, "His name is Ricardo"). This is likely the origin of Chris's confusion. Furthermore, if ''llama'' were a noun, it would be feminine and take the article ''la''.

	-The Spanish word for work in this sense is ''obra'' or ''proyecto'', which is usually part of school-related Spanish vocabulary, so he should know.		-The Spanish word for work in this sense is ''obra'' or ''proyecto'', which is usually part of school-related Spanish vocabulary, so he should know.

MarcelDubois: /* Mistakes */

2025-12-11T19:41:06Z

Mistakes

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	-''finallié'' would go after ''estancé'' if ''estancé'' ~~was~~ a noun. However, ''estancé'' (''estanqué'') literally translates to "I stagnated". It is clear Chris believes it means "sentence"; the correct word is ''frase'' or ''oración'', ~~also~~ the word is ''final~~'' instead of ''finallié~~''.		-''finallié'' would go after ''estancé'' if ''estancé'' were a noun. However, ''estancé'' (''estanqué'') literally translates to "I stagnated". It is clear Chris believes it means "sentence"; the correct word is ''frase'' or ''oración''. Also, instead of ''finallié'', the correct word is ''final'' .

	-The Spanish equivalent of "introductory" is believably ''introductorio'' and the word for "paragraph" is ''párrafo''.		-The Spanish equivalent of "introductory" is believably ''introductorio'' and the word for "paragraph" is ''párrafo''.

MarcelDubois: corrected spellings to those that appear on the paper itself, and format and grammar correction

2025-12-11T19:31:32Z

corrected spellings to those that appear on the paper itself, and format and grammar correction

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	# The thesis statement es el finallié <s>sentenc</s> estancé de íntroductóry paragraphé.		# The thesis statement es el finallié <s>sentenc</s> estancé de íntroductóry paragraphé.
	# Tú escribes de literáture, el thesis inclúr el <s>[illegible]</s> llama de author y llama de work.		# Tú escribes de literáture, el thesis inclúr el <s>[illegible]</s> llama de author y llama de work.
	# Los paragraphs ~~support~~ y relaté qúe el thesis.		# Los paragraphs supporte y relaté qúe el thesis.
	# Los paragraphs tienes el topic estancés, hablan el unifying concepto de el paragraph.		# Los paragraphs tienes el topic estancés, hablan el unifying concepto de el paragraph.
	# Los details ~~support~~ y relate a el topic estánce de paragraph.		# Los details supporte y relate a el topic estánce de paragraph.
	# Neccisitas <sup>los</sup> adequáte supporte details.		# Neccisitas <sup>los</sup> adequáte supporte details.
	# <u>Escribe</u> el literáture en presénte tense.		# <u>Escribe</u> el literáture en presénte tense.
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	-''finallié'' would go after ''estancé'' if ''estancé'' was a noun, ~~however~~ estancé (estanqué) literally translates to ''I stagnated~~'', it~~ is clear Chris believes it means sentence, the correct word is ''frase'' or ''oración'', also the word is ''final''.		-''finallié'' would go after ''estancé'' if ''estancé'' was a noun. However, ''estancé'' (''estanqué'') literally translates to "I stagnated". It is clear Chris believes it means "sentence"; the correct word is ''frase'' or ''oración'', also the word is ''final'' instead of ''finallié''.

	-The Spanish equivalent of introductory is, believably ''introductorio'' and the word for paragraph is ''párrafo''.		-The Spanish equivalent of "introductory" is believably ''introductorio'' and the word for "paragraph" is ''párrafo''.

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	-Chris neglects to conjugate "escribes" into the imperative ''escribe''.		-Chris neglects to conjugate ''escribes'' into the imperative ''escribe''.

	-The Spanish form of ''thesis'' is spelled ''tesis''.		-The Spanish form of "thesis" is spelled ''tesis''.

	-He misspells and erroneously uses the infinitive form of ''incluir''.		-He misspells and erroneously uses the infinitive form of ''incluir''.

	-He uses ''llama'' as the translation for ''name~~'', anyone~~ who has been to one day at a Spanish class likely knows that ''llama'' is a verb and means ''call'', while the correct word would be ''nombre''. It is to be noted that ''llamar'' is a pronominal verb and, as such, can be conjugated in reflexive form; Spanish speakers often use this form to introduce themselves or other people (e.g., ''Él se llama Ricardo'', lit. "he calls himself Ricardo", as opposed to the common English construct, "His name is Ricardo"). This is likely the origin of Chris's confusion. Furthermore, if ''llama'' were a noun it would be feminine and ~~addressed with~~ the ~~feminine~~ article ''la''.		-He uses ''llama'' as the translation for "name". Anyone who has been to one day at a Spanish class likely knows that ''llama'' is a verb and means ''call'', while the correct word would be ''nombre''. It is to be noted that ''llamar'' is a pronominal verb and, as such, can be conjugated in reflexive form; Spanish speakers often use this form to introduce themselves or other people (e.g., ''Él se llama Ricardo'', lit. "He calls himself Ricardo", as opposed to the common English construct, "His name is Ricardo"). This is likely the origin of Chris's confusion. Furthermore, if ''llama'' were a noun, it would be feminine and take the article ''la''.

	-The Spanish word for work in this sense is ''obra'' or ''proyecto'', which is usually part of school-related Spanish vocabulary, so he should know.		-The Spanish word for work in this sense is ''obra'' or ''proyecto'', which is usually part of school-related Spanish vocabulary, so he should know.
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	-Chris uses the words ''~~support~~'' and ''relaté'' in lieu of ''apoyan'' and ''relacionan''.		-Chris uses the words ''supporte'' and ''relaté'' in lieu of ''apoyan'' and ''relacionan''.

	-~~Erroneously~~ uses ''~~paragragh~~'' and ''thesis''.		-He erroneously uses ''paragraph'' and ''thesis''.

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	-Chris uses the 2nd person singular (you) conjugation for ''tener''.		-Chris uses the 2nd person singular (you) conjugation for ''tener''.

	-~~Uses~~ ''paragraph'' and ''estancés as well as the word ''unifying'' when the word is "unificante~~", also~~ ''unifying" is a modifier and would go after ''concepto''.		-He uses ''paragraph'' and ''estancés'', as well as the word ''unifying'' when the correct word is ''unificante''. ''unifying'' is also a modifier and would go after ''concepto''.

	-~~When the words~~ ''de'' and ''el'' ~~are used consecutively they are contracted~~ into ''del''.		-He doesn't contract ''de'' and ''el'' into ''del''.

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	-The Spanish word for ''details'' is ''detalles'', Chris also uses ''~~support~~, ~~relaté, estancé~~,'' and ''paragraph''.		-The Spanish word for "details" is ''detalles'', Chris also uses ''supporte'', ''relate'', ''estánce'', and ''paragraph''.

	-He uses ''topic'' when he means ''tema''.		-He uses ''topic'' when he means ''tema''.

	-~~Doesn~~'t contract ''a'' and ''el'' into ''al''.		-He doesn't contract ''a'' and ''el'' into ''al''.

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	-The word for ''adequate'' is ''adecuado''.		-The word for "adequate" is ''adecuado''.

	-He repeats ''~~support~~'' and ''details''.		-He repeats ''supporte'' and ''details''.

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	-The Spanish word for ''literature'' is ''literatura'' and is feminine.		-The Spanish word for "literature" is ''literatura'' and is feminine.

	-Again Chris puts the adjective before the noun like in English.		-Again Chris puts the adjective before the noun like in English.

	-~~Uses~~ ''tense'' when he means ''tiempo''.		-He uses ''tense'' when he means ''tiempo''.

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	-Chris begins speaking French somehow, and uses the French word for very, ''tres'', and uses ''muchaco'' instead of ''mucho''~~, literally writing "very boy"~~.		-Chris begins speaking French somehow, and uses the French word for "very", ''tres'', and uses ''muchaco'' instead of ''mucho''.

	-He uses ''~~points''/''pointe~~'' when he means ''punto''.		-He uses ''pointé'' when he means ''punto''.

	-It is not clear what the sentence is supposed to mean but it is wrong in ''some'' way.		-It is not clear what the sentence is supposed to mean but it is wrong in some way.

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	-This sentence makes no sense, he flops between ''crear'' (create) and ''creer'' (believe) and neither really ~~parse~~. He could be ~~employing~~ the subjunctive of either verb but even if his two year Spanish class got to the subjunctive mood he [[Manchester High Leaks\|most certainly didn't learn it.]]		-This sentence makes no sense: he flops between ''crear'' ("create") and ''creer'' ("believe") and neither really parses. He could be attempting the subjunctive of either verb, but even if his two-year Spanish class got to the subjunctive mood, he [[Manchester High Leaks\|most certainly didn't learn it.]]

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	-While this may be the most correct line, the Spanish word for carefully is ''cuidadosamente''.		-While this may be the most correct line, the Spanish word for "carefully" is ''cuidadosamente''.

	-''Cheques'' is not conjugated into the imperative ''~~cheque~~''.		-''Cheques'' is not conjugated into the imperative ''Cheque''.

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MarcelDubois: /* Mistakes */

2025-12-11T18:51:33Z

Mistakes

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	-He misspells and erroneously uses the infinitive form of ''incluir''.		-He misspells and erroneously uses the infinitive form of ''incluir''.

	-He uses ''llama'' as the translation for ''name'', anyone who has been to one day at a Spanish class likely knows that ''llama'' is a verb and means ''call'', while the correct word would be ''nombre''. It is to be noted that ''llamar'' is a pronominal verb, ~~and~~ as such in can be conjugated in reflexive form; Spanish speakers often use this form to introduce themselves or other people (e.g., ''Él se llama Ricardo'', lit. "he calls himself Ricardo", as opposed to the common English construct, "His name is Ricardo"). This is likely the origin of Chris's confusion. Furthermore, if ''llama'' were a noun it would be feminine and addressed with the feminine article ''la''.		-He uses ''llama'' as the translation for ''name'', anyone who has been to one day at a Spanish class likely knows that ''llama'' is a verb and means ''call'', while the correct word would be ''nombre''. It is to be noted that ''llamar'' is a pronominal verb and, as such, can be conjugated in reflexive form; Spanish speakers often use this form to introduce themselves or other people (e.g., ''Él se llama Ricardo'', lit. "he calls himself Ricardo", as opposed to the common English construct, "His name is Ricardo"). This is likely the origin of Chris's confusion. Furthermore, if ''llama'' were a noun it would be feminine and addressed with the feminine article ''la''.

	-The Spanish word for work in this sense is ''obra'' or ''proyecto'', which is usually part of school-related Spanish vocabulary, so he should know.		-The Spanish word for work in this sense is ''obra'' or ''proyecto'', which is usually part of school-related Spanish vocabulary, so he should know.

Dodo Conservative: /* Mistakes */

2025-03-05T19:19:26Z

Mistakes

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	-This sentence makes no sense, he flops between ''crear'' (create) and ''creer'' (believe) and neither really parse. He could be employing the subjunctive of either verb but even if his two year Spanish class got to the subjunctive mood he [[Manchester High Leaks\|most certainly didn't learn it.]]		-This sentence makes no sense, he flops between ''crear'' (create) and ''creer'' (believe) and neither really parse. He could be employing the subjunctive of either verb but even if his two year Spanish class got to the subjunctive mood he [[Manchester High Leaks\|most certainly didn't learn it.]]

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Dodo Conservative: /* Mistakes */

2025-02-26T22:21:16Z

Mistakes

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	-He uses ''llama'' as the translation for ''name'', anyone who has been to one day at a Spanish class likely knows that ''llama'' is a verb and means ''call'', while the correct word would be ''nombre''. It is to be noted that ''llamar'' is a pronominal verb, and as such in can be conjugated in reflexive form; Spanish speakers often use this form to introduce themselves or other people (e.g., ''Él se llama Ricardo'', lit. "he calls himself Ricardo", as opposed to the common English construct, "His name is Ricardo"). This is likely the origin of Chris's confusion. Furthermore, if ''llama'' were a noun it would be feminine and addressed with the feminine article ''la''.		-He uses ''llama'' as the translation for ''name'', anyone who has been to one day at a Spanish class likely knows that ''llama'' is a verb and means ''call'', while the correct word would be ''nombre''. It is to be noted that ''llamar'' is a pronominal verb, and as such in can be conjugated in reflexive form; Spanish speakers often use this form to introduce themselves or other people (e.g., ''Él se llama Ricardo'', lit. "he calls himself Ricardo", as opposed to the common English construct, "His name is Ricardo"). This is likely the origin of Chris's confusion. Furthermore, if ''llama'' were a noun it would be feminine and addressed with the feminine article ''la''.

	-The ~~spanish~~ word for work ~~even~~ in this sense is ''obra'' or ''proyecto'', which ~~any high~~ school Spanish ~~student~~ should know.		-The Spanish word for work in this sense is ''obra'' or ''proyecto'', which is usually part of school-related Spanish vocabulary, so he should know.

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Blue Bully at 21:35, 25 February 2025

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	-This sentence makes no sense, he flops between ''crear'' (create) and ''creer'' (believe) and neither really parse. He could be employing the subjunctive of either verb but even if his two year Spanish class got to the subjunctive mood he [[~~Chris and Education~~\|most certainly didn't learn it.]]		-This sentence makes no sense, he flops between ''crear'' (create) and ''creer'' (believe) and neither really parse. He could be employing the subjunctive of either verb but even if his two year Spanish class got to the subjunctive mood he [[Manchester High Leaks\|most certainly didn't learn it.]]

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Blue Bully: Refined some commentary on the Spanish in the paper

2025-02-25T21:32:07Z

Refined some commentary on the Spanish in the paper

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	-He uses ''llama'' as the translation for ''name'', anyone who has been to one day at a Spanish class likely knows that ''llama'' is a verb and means ''call'', while the correct word would be ''nombre''. It is to be noted that ''llamar'' is a pronominal verb, and as such in can be conjugated in reflexive form; Spanish speakers often use this form to introduce themselves or other people (e.g., ''Él se llama Ricardo'', lit. "he calls himself Ricardo", as opposed to the common English construct, "His name is Ricardo"). This is likely the origin of Chris's confusion. Furthermore, if ''llama'' were a noun it would be feminine and addressed with the feminine article ''la''.		-He uses ''llama'' as the translation for ''name'', anyone who has been to one day at a Spanish class likely knows that ''llama'' is a verb and means ''call'', while the correct word would be ''nombre''. It is to be noted that ''llamar'' is a pronominal verb, and as such in can be conjugated in reflexive form; Spanish speakers often use this form to introduce themselves or other people (e.g., ''Él se llama Ricardo'', lit. "he calls himself Ricardo", as opposed to the common English construct, "His name is Ricardo"). This is likely the origin of Chris's confusion. Furthermore, if ''llama'' were a noun it would be feminine and addressed with the feminine article ''la''.

	-The spanish word for work even in this sense is ''~~Trabajo~~'', which any high school Spanish student should know.		-The spanish word for work even in this sense is ''obra'' or ''proyecto'', which any high school Spanish student should know.

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	-This sentence makes no sense, ~~it is not clear what verb~~ he ~~meant, but~~ ''creer'' ~~means~~ to ~~think or believe~~.		-This sentence makes no sense, he flops between ''crear'' (create) and ''creer'' (believe) and neither really parse. He could be employing the subjunctive of either verb but even if his two year Spanish class got to the subjunctive mood he [[Chris and Education\|most certainly didn't learn it.]]

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Blue Bully at 21:23, 25 February 2025

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	-''finallié'' would go after ''estancé'' if ''estancé'' was a noun, however estancé literally translates to ''stagnated'', it is clear Chris believes it means sentence, the correct word is ''~~sentencia~~'', also the word is ''final''.		-''finallié'' would go after ''estancé'' if ''estancé'' was a noun, however estancé (estanqué) literally translates to ''I stagnated'', it is clear Chris believes it means sentence, the correct word is ''frase'' or ''oración'', also the word is ''final''.

	-The Spanish equivalent of introductory is, believably ''introductorio'' and the word for paragraph is ''párrafo''.		-The Spanish equivalent of introductory is, believably ''introductorio'' and the word for paragraph is ''párrafo''.
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	-He misspells and erroneously uses the infinitive form of ''incluir''.		-He misspells and erroneously uses the infinitive form of ''incluir''.

	-He uses ''llama'' as the translation for ''name'', anyone who has been to one day at a Spanish class likely knows that ''llama'' is a verb and means ''call'', while the correct word would be ''nombre''. It is to be noted that ''llamar'' is a pronominal verb, and as such in can be conjugated in reflexive form; Spanish speakers often use this form to introduce themselves or other people (e.g., ''Él se llama Ricardo'', lit. "he calls himself Ricardo", as ~~opossed~~ to the common English construct, "His name is Ricardo"). This is likely the origin of Chris's confusion. Furthermore, if ''llama'' were a noun it would be feminine and addressed with the feminine article ''la''.		-He uses ''llama'' as the translation for ''name'', anyone who has been to one day at a Spanish class likely knows that ''llama'' is a verb and means ''call'', while the correct word would be ''nombre''. It is to be noted that ''llamar'' is a pronominal verb, and as such in can be conjugated in reflexive form; Spanish speakers often use this form to introduce themselves or other people (e.g., ''Él se llama Ricardo'', lit. "he calls himself Ricardo", as opposed to the common English construct, "His name is Ricardo"). This is likely the origin of Chris's confusion. Furthermore, if ''llama'' were a noun it would be feminine and addressed with the feminine article ''la''.

	-The spanish word for work even in this sense is Trabajo, which any high school Spanish student should know.		-The spanish word for work even in this sense is ''Trabajo'', which any high school Spanish student should know.

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	-Chris uses the 2nd person singular (you) conjugation for ''tener''.		-Chris uses the 2nd person singular (you) conjugation for ''tener''.

	-Uses ''paragraph'' and ''estancés as well as the word ''unifying'' when the word is "~~unificando~~", also ''unifying" is ~~an adjective~~ and would go after ''concepto''.		-Uses ''paragraph'' and ''estancés as well as the word ''unifying'' when the word is "unificante", also ''unifying" is a modifier and would go after ''concepto''.

	-When the words ''de'' and ''el'' are used consecutively they are ~~combined~~ into ''del''.		-When the words ''de'' and ''el'' are used consecutively they are contracted into ''del''.

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	-He uses ''topic'' when he means ''tema''.		-He uses ''topic'' when he means ''tema''.

	-Doesn't ~~combine~~ ''a'' and ''el'' into ''al''.		-Doesn't contract ''a'' and ''el'' into ''al''.

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Amanitie at 12:39, 27 September 2024

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	[[File:13 Lucky Writing Tips.jpg\|thumb\|The paper.]]		[[File:13 Lucky Writing Tips.jpg\|thumb\|The paper.]]

	'''13 Lucky Writing Tips''' is a school paper ~~detailing~~ a list of techniques to improve rhetoric. It is likely Chris simply wrote them down as a teacher read them off, as he begins disregarding them as soon as tip #4, switching from standard written English to Spanish in order to flex his Peggy Hill-esque grasp on the language.		'''13 Lucky Writing Tips''' is a school paper recovered in the [[Manchester High Leaks]]. It details a list of techniques to improve rhetoric. It is likely [[Chris]] simply wrote them down as a teacher read them off, as he begins disregarding them as soon as tip #4, switching from standard written English to Spanish in order to flex his Peggy Hill-esque grasp on the language.
	It is possible that Chris actually invented a new kind of grammatical error: for most learners of a new language it is a common mistake to use false cognates (a word that seems like a word in their own language but has a completely different meaning), but Chris pushes the envelope by using ''assumed'' cognates, words that don't exist in the language at all, that Chris made up. Thus, this document is a candid example of Chris's [[Chris and Spanish\|poor grasp of the Spanish language]].		It is possible that Chris actually invented a new kind of grammatical error: for most learners of a new language it is a common mistake to use false cognates (a word that seems like a word in their own language but has a completely different meaning), but Chris pushes the envelope by using ''assumed'' cognates, words that don't exist in the language at all, that Chris made up. Thus, this document is a candid example of Chris's [[Chris and Spanish\|poor grasp of the Spanish language]].

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	-''Cheques'' is not conjugated into the imperative ''cheque''.		-''Cheques'' is not conjugated into the imperative ''cheque''.

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