Talk:Chris and writing - Revision history

Asperhes at 00:05, 8 July 2014

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	Probably too minor point to mention in the article, but it's a bit ironic that MLW is quoting the witches' line from Macbeth. The play is basically about a crazyhead (Macbeth) digging his own grave after following vague hints from truth-speaking trolls (the witches)... --''[[User:Wwwwolf\|wwwwolf]]'' <span style="font-size:smaller;">([[User talk:Wwwwolf\|wake me when you need me]])</span> 13:45, 15 August 2010 (PDT)		Probably too minor point to mention in the article, but it's a bit ironic that MLW is quoting the witches' line from Macbeth. The play is basically about a crazyhead (Macbeth) digging his own grave after following vague hints from truth-speaking trolls (the witches)... --''[[User:Wwwwolf\|wwwwolf]]'' <span style="font-size:smaller;">([[User talk:Wwwwolf\|wake me when you need me]])</span> 13:45, 15 August 2010 (PDT)

			--I added a section on his essays, feel free to screw around with it. --asperhes, 7/7/14

Wwwwolf: /* Shakespeare */ new section

2010-08-15T20:45:43Z

Shakespeare: new section

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	I'm working on a section in my [[User:Bill_Lumburg/Sandbox\|sandbox]] on mary sues. Will it fit anywhere in this article? [[User:Bill Lumburg\|Bill Lumburg]] 18:56, 12 June 2010 (UTC)		I'm working on a section in my [[User:Bill_Lumburg/Sandbox\|sandbox]] on mary sues. Will it fit anywhere in this article? [[User:Bill Lumburg\|Bill Lumburg]] 18:56, 12 June 2010 (UTC)

			== Shakespeare ==

			Probably too minor point to mention in the article, but it's a bit ironic that MLW is quoting the witches' line from Macbeth. The play is basically about a crazyhead (Macbeth) digging his own grave after following vague hints from truth-speaking trolls (the witches)... --''[[User:Wwwwolf\|wwwwolf]]'' <span style="font-size:smaller;">([[User talk:Wwwwolf\|wake me when you need me]])</span> 13:45, 15 August 2010 (PDT)

Bill Lumburg: /* Mary Sue */ new section

2010-06-12T18:56:18Z

Mary Sue: new section

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	: I'm a bit torn here. On the other hand, the shorter version is very awesome; I always felt that I was being a little bit unsystematic and rambling-prone here. On the other hand, this is one of the articles which would benefit from listing the multiple problems in detail, and offer some illustration of ''why'' some of the things Chris does is bad. In summary: good job cutting the article down, but I need to think how to best reintroduce some of the old stuff; following your good example, it's not going to be back in form of a gigantic rambling ball of cruft, so rest easy. =) --''[[User:Wwwwolf\|wwwwolf]]'' <span style="font-size:smaller;">([[User talk:Wwwwolf\|wake me when you need me]])</span> 08:17, 12 May 2010 (UTC)		: I'm a bit torn here. On the other hand, the shorter version is very awesome; I always felt that I was being a little bit unsystematic and rambling-prone here. On the other hand, this is one of the articles which would benefit from listing the multiple problems in detail, and offer some illustration of ''why'' some of the things Chris does is bad. In summary: good job cutting the article down, but I need to think how to best reintroduce some of the old stuff; following your good example, it's not going to be back in form of a gigantic rambling ball of cruft, so rest easy. =) --''[[User:Wwwwolf\|wwwwolf]]'' <span style="font-size:smaller;">([[User talk:Wwwwolf\|wake me when you need me]])</span> 08:17, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
	I was thinking of adding to this myself. Don't hesitate; when the dust settles, I'll give it another polishing.[[User:CWCspatcher\|CWCspatcher]] 13:34, 12 May 2010 (UTC)		I was thinking of adding to this myself. Don't hesitate; when the dust settles, I'll give it another polishing.[[User:CWCspatcher\|CWCspatcher]] 13:34, 12 May 2010 (UTC)

			== Mary Sue ==

			I'm working on a section in my [[User:Bill_Lumburg/Sandbox\|sandbox]] on mary sues. Will it fit anywhere in this article? [[User:Bill Lumburg\|Bill Lumburg]] 18:56, 12 June 2010 (UTC)

CWCspatcher: /* Rewrite */

2010-05-12T13:34:37Z

Rewrite

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	After my rewrite of "Chris and Art" was warmly received by its author, this was the next place I went. As always, I hope my editing efforts satisfy. [[User:CWCspatcher\|CWCspatcher]] 03:39, 12 May 2010 (UTC)		After my rewrite of "Chris and Art" was warmly received by its author, this was the next place I went. As always, I hope my editing efforts satisfy. [[User:CWCspatcher\|CWCspatcher]] 03:39, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
	: I'm a bit torn here. On the other hand, the shorter version is very awesome; I always felt that I was being a little bit unsystematic and rambling-prone here. On the other hand, this is one of the articles which would benefit from listing the multiple problems in detail, and offer some illustration of ''why'' some of the things Chris does is bad. In summary: good job cutting the article down, but I need to think how to best reintroduce some of the old stuff; following your good example, it's not going to be back in form of a gigantic rambling ball of cruft, so rest easy. =) --''[[User:Wwwwolf\|wwwwolf]]'' <span style="font-size:smaller;">([[User talk:Wwwwolf\|wake me when you need me]])</span> 08:17, 12 May 2010 (UTC)		: I'm a bit torn here. On the other hand, the shorter version is very awesome; I always felt that I was being a little bit unsystematic and rambling-prone here. On the other hand, this is one of the articles which would benefit from listing the multiple problems in detail, and offer some illustration of ''why'' some of the things Chris does is bad. In summary: good job cutting the article down, but I need to think how to best reintroduce some of the old stuff; following your good example, it's not going to be back in form of a gigantic rambling ball of cruft, so rest easy. =) --''[[User:Wwwwolf\|wwwwolf]]'' <span style="font-size:smaller;">([[User talk:Wwwwolf\|wake me when you need me]])</span> 08:17, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
			I was thinking of adding to this myself. Don't hesitate; when the dust settles, I'll give it another polishing.[[User:CWCspatcher\|CWCspatcher]] 13:34, 12 May 2010 (UTC)

Wwwwolf: /* Rewrite */

2010-05-12T08:17:33Z

Rewrite

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	After my rewrite of "Chris and Art" was warmly received by its author, this was the next place I went. As always, I hope my editing efforts satisfy. [[User:CWCspatcher\|CWCspatcher]] 03:39, 12 May 2010 (UTC)		After my rewrite of "Chris and Art" was warmly received by its author, this was the next place I went. As always, I hope my editing efforts satisfy. [[User:CWCspatcher\|CWCspatcher]] 03:39, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
			: I'm a bit torn here. On the other hand, the shorter version is very awesome; I always felt that I was being a little bit unsystematic and rambling-prone here. On the other hand, this is one of the articles which would benefit from listing the multiple problems in detail, and offer some illustration of ''why'' some of the things Chris does is bad. In summary: good job cutting the article down, but I need to think how to best reintroduce some of the old stuff; following your good example, it's not going to be back in form of a gigantic rambling ball of cruft, so rest easy. =) --''[[User:Wwwwolf\|wwwwolf]]'' <span style="font-size:smaller;">([[User talk:Wwwwolf\|wake me when you need me]])</span> 08:17, 12 May 2010 (UTC)

Champthom: /* To Kill a Mockingbird */

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To Kill a Mockingbird

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	Should this book have its own article here? At least, Chris's bastardised recollection of it, as shown in his conversation with Kacey's father[[User:Knucklechu\|Knucklechu]] 12:04, 30 April 2010 (UTC)		Should this book have its own article here? At least, Chris's bastardised recollection of it, as shown in his conversation with Kacey's father[[User:Knucklechu\|Knucklechu]] 12:04, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
			*We could make a Books page, to discuss times Chris have mentioned the books he's read, that way we could also merge RL Stein into that page. --[[User:Champthom\|Champthom]] 04:40, 12 May 2010 (UTC)

	==Edit==		==Edit==

CWCspatcher: /* Edit */

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Edit

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	To the person who edited this, I could kiss you on the nuts. --[[User:Delabonte\|Delabonte]] 03:29, 12 May 2010 (UTC)		To the person who edited this, I could kiss you on the nuts. --[[User:Delabonte\|Delabonte]] 03:29, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
			Thank you kindly. I try. [[User:CWCspatcher\|CWCspatcher]] 03:40, 12 May 2010 (UTC)

	== Rewrite ==		== Rewrite ==

	After my rewrite of "Chris and Art" was warmly received by its author, this was the next place I went. As always, I hope my editing efforts satisfy. [[User:CWCspatcher\|CWCspatcher]] 03:39, 12 May 2010 (UTC)		After my rewrite of "Chris and Art" was warmly received by its author, this was the next place I went. As always, I hope my editing efforts satisfy. [[User:CWCspatcher\|CWCspatcher]] 03:39, 12 May 2010 (UTC)

CWCspatcher: /* Rewrite */ new section

2010-05-12T03:39:02Z

Rewrite: new section

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	To the person who edited this, I could kiss you on the nuts. --[[User:Delabonte\|Delabonte]] 03:29, 12 May 2010 (UTC)		To the person who edited this, I could kiss you on the nuts. --[[User:Delabonte\|Delabonte]] 03:29, 12 May 2010 (UTC)

			== Rewrite ==

			After my rewrite of "Chris and Art" was warmly received by its author, this was the next place I went. As always, I hope my editing efforts satisfy. [[User:CWCspatcher\|CWCspatcher]] 03:39, 12 May 2010 (UTC)

Delabonte at 03:29, 12 May 2010

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	Should this book have its own article here? At least, Chris's bastardised recollection of it, as shown in his conversation with Kacey's father[[User:Knucklechu\|Knucklechu]] 12:04, 30 April 2010 (UTC)		Should this book have its own article here? At least, Chris's bastardised recollection of it, as shown in his conversation with Kacey's father[[User:Knucklechu\|Knucklechu]] 12:04, 30 April 2010 (UTC)

			==Edit==

			To the person who edited this, I could kiss you on the nuts. --[[User:Delabonte\|Delabonte]] 03:29, 12 May 2010 (UTC)

Knucklechu: /* To Kill a Mockingbird */ new section

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To Kill a Mockingbird: new section

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	Fantastic article. One thing on exposition - I think this goes back to Chris's autism. I forget how it's described but one trait of autism is that they tend to assume that other people know what they know. It's like in the Sonichu comics - Chris assumes we know who Mary Lee Walsh, Sarah Hammer, etc. because he knows who they are and therefore so should we. It took a while for people to figure out that these were based on real people. So yeah. --[[User:Champthom\|Champthom]] 09:52, 8 December 2009 (CET)		Fantastic article. One thing on exposition - I think this goes back to Chris's autism. I forget how it's described but one trait of autism is that they tend to assume that other people know what they know. It's like in the Sonichu comics - Chris assumes we know who Mary Lee Walsh, Sarah Hammer, etc. because he knows who they are and therefore so should we. It took a while for people to figure out that these were based on real people. So yeah. --[[User:Champthom\|Champthom]] 09:52, 8 December 2009 (CET)

			== To Kill a Mockingbird ==

			Should this book have its own article here? At least, Chris's bastardised recollection of it, as shown in his conversation with Kacey's father[[User:Knucklechu\|Knucklechu]] 12:04, 30 April 2010 (UTC)

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	After my rewrite of "Chris and Art" was warmly received by its author, this was the next place I went. As always, I hope my editing efforts satisfy. [[User:CWCspatcher\|CWCspatcher]] 03:39, 12 May 2010 (UTC)		After my rewrite of "Chris and Art" was warmly received by its author, this was the next place I went. As always, I hope my editing efforts satisfy. [[User:CWCspatcher\|CWCspatcher]] 03:39, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
	: I'm a bit torn here. On the other hand, the shorter version is very awesome; I always felt that I was being a little bit unsystematic and rambling-prone here. On the other hand, this is one of the articles which would benefit from listing the multiple problems in detail, and offer some illustration of ''why'' some of the things Chris does is bad. In summary: good job cutting the article down, but I need to think how to best reintroduce some of the old stuff; following your good example, it's not going to be back in form of a gigantic rambling ball of cruft, so rest easy. =) --''[[User:Wwwwolf\|wwwwolf]]'' <span style="font-size:smaller;">([[User talk:Wwwwolf\|wake me when you need me]])</span> 08:17, 12 May 2010 (UTC)		: I'm a bit torn here. On the other hand, the shorter version is very awesome; I always felt that I was being a little bit unsystematic and rambling-prone here. On the other hand, this is one of the articles which would benefit from listing the multiple problems in detail, and offer some illustration of ''why'' some of the things Chris does is bad. In summary: good job cutting the article down, but I need to think how to best reintroduce some of the old stuff; following your good example, it's not going to be back in form of a gigantic rambling ball of cruft, so rest easy. =) --''[[User:Wwwwolf\|wwwwolf]]'' <span style="font-size:smaller;">([[User talk:Wwwwolf\|wake me when you need me]])</span> 08:17, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
			I was thinking of adding to this myself. Don't hesitate; when the dust settles, I'll give it another polishing.[[User:CWCspatcher\|CWCspatcher]] 13:34, 12 May 2010 (UTC)