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{{quote| Well, that's pretty much what I expected. It's not traced, so I guess ''that's'' something.|''Rosechu's Story'' creator Trickie, upon discovering that Chris ripped off her comic.<ref>https://kiwifarms.net/threads/sonichu-15-page-1-dates.37088/page-4#post-2826274</ref>}}
{{quote| Well, that's pretty much what I expected.|''Rosechu's Story'' creator Trickie, upon discovering that Chris ripped off her comic.<ref>[[Kiwi Farms posts (other users)#Trickie Comments on Sonichu 15]]</ref>}}


{{Infobox/Comic
{{Infobox/Comic
| titleandissue  = Sonichu #15
| titleandissue  = Sonichu #15
| cover          = Sonichu 15 cover.jpg  
| cover          = Sonichu book 0 hd cover by nightstarrosechu2891 dg6o1j5-pre.jpg
| coverdate      = 16 [[October 2017]]
| coverdate      = 16 [[October 2017]]
| finishedcomic  = ''In Progress''
| finishedcomic  =  
| pagecount      = 1 (so far)
| pagecount      = 60 (so far)
| Episodes       =  
| episodes       = 1
| previous      = [[Sonichu 14|''Sonichu'' #14]]
| previous      = [[Sonichu 14|''Sonichu'' #14]]
| next          =  
| next          = [[Sonichu 16|''Sonichu'' #16]]
}}
}}


'''''Sonichu'' #15''' was announced by Chris on 17 October 2017, directly following the completion of [[Sonichu 12]]. It will be a "Retelling of the Classic First Three Episodes, BUT with More Details; More Commentary and Dialogue from Sonichu and Rosechu.<ref>https://sonichu.com/cwcki/October_2017_Patreon_posts#Sonichu_.2315_Cover.21</ref>"
'''''Sonichu'' #0 HD''', previously known as '''''Sonichu'' #15''', is the seventeenth issue of ''Sonichu''. It is a mix of material [[Things Chris has ripped off|plagiarised]] from a fan comic titled ''[http://rosechustory.tumblr.com/ Rosechu's Story]'' and lore [[brainwashed]] into Chris by the [[Idea Guys]]. Its cover is an alternate version of the infamous "Zap to the extreme!" cover on [[Sonichu 0|''Sonichu'' #0]], with a [[transgender]] Chris directing Sonichu, who responds, "Yes, I will!! Thank you, mother!!!"; Chris believes that his art has improved in the thirteen years between the two books.<ref>[[October_2017_tweets#Sonichu_0_and_15_cover_comparison]]</ref>


The cover is an alternate version of the infamous "zap to the extreme" cover on [[Sonichu 0]], with a [[Tomgirl|transgender]] Chris directing Sonichu, who responds, "Yes, I will!! Thank you, mother!!!" Chris believes that his art has improved in the 13-year span between the two books<ref>https://sonichu.com/cwcki/October_2017_tweets#Sonichu_0_and_15_cover_comparison</ref>
Due to Chris's [[Jail Saga|recent legal troubles]], it initially seemed that the issue would not be completed anytime soon. His return to DeviantArt and renumbering of the comic, however, makes it seem that he is planning on resuming work.


[[File:CWC's Sonichu 15 vs Trickie's Rosechu's Story fancomic.png||150px|thumb|left|Comparing art between Sonichu 15 and fancomic ''Rosechu's Story''.]]
==Production notes==
Chris ripped off a fancomic titled ''[http://rosechustory.tumblr.com/ Rosechu's Story]''. In doing so, he made an alteration, depicting the Raichu on his page with a blunt tail (in the Pokemon games, this marks a Raichu as female).
''Sonichu 15'' was announced by Chris on 17 October 2017 directly after he completed [[Sonichu 12|''Sonichu'' #12]], put on hold during the [[Idea Guys]] saga, and resumed in July 2019 until Chris lost interest and abandoned the comic again.


{{clear}}
It was intended as a "Retelling of the Classic First Three Episodes, BUT with More Details; More Commentary and Dialogue from Sonichu and Rosechu",<ref>[[October_2017_Patreon_posts#Sonichu #15 Cover!]]</ref> Days before the announcement, Chris learned of the fan comic ''Rosechu's Story''.<ref>[[October 2017 tweets#Chris finds out about Rosechu's Story, is confused by the title]]</ref> Reading it on [[Tumblr]], he enjoyed its story so much he decided to copy it for ''Sonichu 15'', acknowledging the source material with a hastily scribbled note on the front cover.
 
{{quote|Well, Christine has already indicated to me that she considers [Rosechu's Story] to be part of the chronicled history of the electric hedgehogs, and that all this stuff was in her brain somewhere, it just didn't come out until she read it in my comic. So even if I did make a fuss about it, she probably would've done this anyway and the only difference would be that I wouldn't get credit for it at all.|''Rosechu's Story'' creator Trickie.<ref>[[Kiwi Farms posts (other users)#Trickie's Handling of Chris's Copying of Rosechu's Story]]</ref>}}
 
[[File:Rosechu's Story front back cover.jpeg|thumb|200px|Misleading advertising. A cover Chris drew for ''Rosechu's Story'', with only the spine and fine print on the back cover crediting the actual author and illustrator.]]
 
In addition to ripping off ''Rosechu's Story'', Chris also decided to monetize it for himself. In June 2019, Chris downloaded ''Rosechu's Story'', drew a cover for it in his own artstyle, had it printed as a book through [[Lulu]], and placed it into a lot of Sonichu comics for sale on [[Ebay]]<ref>[[2019 Sales Listings#Sonichu Graphic Novel Set From Zero To Awakening]]</ref> and also sold copies through [[Cwcvilleshopping.com]].
 
In [[August 2023]], Chris uploaded a batch of artwork to his [[NightStarRosechu2891]] DeviantART account. Among those were previously-unreleased colorized versions, and one unreleased page, of the comic. A revised version of the cover was also among the batch; in the newest cover, Chris had altered the comic number, by gluing a slip of paper on top of the page, changing the previous #15 to #0 HD.
 
==Plot==
[[File:Sonichu's parents gassed to death.png|thumb|left|Sonichu mourning his parents' death, an example of the lore introduced by the [[Idea Guys]].]]
 
Chris's weaknesses at [[writing]] stories stands in contrast to the fan favorite ''Rosechu's Story''. Despite extensively copying its scenes, Chris still managed to water down the comic's storyline and emotional impact by ignoring scenes of character conflict, inserting walls of text, revising dialogue to his taste, and breaking up the story flow by adding pages detailing an irrelevant portion of Sonichu's day.
[[File:Sonichu 15 revision tail.png|thumb|Left, original tail. Right, Chris physically altered the page to conform with lore from the [[Idea Guys]].]]
His most noteworthy change to the plot was in deciding to depict the Raichu with a blunt tail (in the ''Pokémon'' games, this marks a Raichu as female), even though ''Rosechu's Story'''s plot depended on [[Rosechu]] having been born male, in an obvious attempt to put his foot down on the much-debated-and-ridiculed topic of Rosechu's birth gender. However, the [[Idea Guys]] subsequently [[brainwashed]] Chris into believing that he was wrong and that Rosechu was really born male,<ref>[[December 2017 Facebook posts#Is Rosechu a transwoman?]]</ref> so Chris reversed his alteration in a 2019 revision.
 
Partway through ''Sonichu 15'', at page 33, Chris ran out of material to adapt from ''Rosechu's Story'' and begins to tell Sonichu's backstory, featuring lore the [[Idea Guys]] had brainwashed into him during one of the comic's hiatuses, one example being Sonichu's parents had been gassed to death by Team Rocket's Koffing Pokémon. Art-wise, as soon as he shifted from copying Trickie's scenes, the composition instantly reverted back to Chris's typical style of characters with minimal backgrounds surrounded by text.


==Comic pages==
==Comic pages==


<center>{{collapsible
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|Comic pages
|Pages from Sonichu 15
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|<gallery mode="nolines" perrow="10">
File:SchuComic15Page1 draft.png
File:Sonichu15cover2019-min.png | Cover (2019)
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<gallery caption="The Genesis of Sonichu & Rosechu" mode="nolines" perrow="10">
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p1.jpg | Page 1 (2019)
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p2.jpg | Page 2
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p3.jpg | Page 3
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p4.jpg | Page 4
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p5.jpg | Page 5
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p6.jpg | Page 6
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p7.jpg | Page 7
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p8.jpg | Page 8
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p9.jpg | Page 9 (2019)
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p10.png | Page 10
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p11.png | Page 11
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p12.png | Page 12
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p13.png | Page 13
File:Sonichu book 0 hd page 14 by nightstarrosechu2891 dg6o2cw-pre.jpg ‎| Page 14
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p15.png | Page 15
File:Sonichu book 0 hd page 16 by nightstarrosechu2891 dg6o2hd-pre.jpg ‎| Page 16
File:Sonichu book 0 hd page 17 by nightstarrosechu2891 dg6o2kg-pre.jpg ‎| Page 17
File:Sonichu book 0 hd page 18 by nightstarrosechu2891 dg6o2mr-pre.jpg ‎| Page 18
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p19.jpg | Page 19
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p20.png | Page 20
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p21.png | Page 21
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p22-min.png | Page 22
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p23-min.png | Page 23
File:Sonichu book 0 hd page 24 by nightstarrosechu2891 dg6o2r9-pre.jpg ‎| Page 24
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p25.png | Page 25
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p26.png | Page 26
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p27.png | Page 27
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p28.png | Page 28
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p29-min.png | Page 29
File:Leaked page 2.jpg | Page 30
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p31-min.png | Page 31
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p32.jpg | Page 32
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p33-min.png | Page 33
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p34-min.png | Page 34
File:Sonichu book 0 hd page 35 by nightstarrosechu2891 dg6o2uo-pre.jpg ‎| Page 35
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p36.jpg | Page 36
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p37-min.png | Page 37
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p38-min.png | Page 38
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p39.jpg | Page 39
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p40.jpg | Page 40
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p41.jpg | Page 41
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p42-min.png | Page 42
File:Leaked page 1.jpg | Page 43
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p44-min.png | Page 44
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p45.jpg | Page 45
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p46.jpg | Page 46
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p47-min.png | Page 47
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p48-min.png | Page 48
File:Sonichu book 0 hd page 49 by nightstarrosechu2891 dg6o2x8-pre.jpg ‎| Page 49
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p50-min.png | Page 50
File:Sonichu book0 hd page 52 by nightstarrosechu2891 dg6o30d-pre.jpg ‎| Page 52
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p64-min.png | Page 64
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<gallery caption="Original Uncolored Pages" mode="nolines" perrow="10">
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p14.png | Page 14
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p16.png | Page 16
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p17.png | Page 17
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p18.jpg | Page 18
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p24-min.png | Page 24
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p30-min.png | Page 30
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p35-min.png | Page 35
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p43-min.png | Page 43
File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p49-min.png | Page 49
</gallery>
<gallery caption="Original 2017 Pages" mode="nolines" perrow="10">
File:Sonichu - Issue 15, Cover.jpg | Cover (2017)
File:SchuComic15Page1 draft.png | Page 1 (2017)
File:SchuComic15Page9 draft.jpg | Page 9 (2017)
</gallery>
}}</center>
 
==Revisions==
<center>
{| class="wikitable collapsible" width="600"
! colspan="4"|Sonichu #15 Version Comparison
|-
!Page Number
!2017 Version
!2019 Version
!2023 Version
!Notes
|-
|Cover
|[[File:Sonichu - Issue 15, Cover.jpg|120px|frameless|center|text-bottom]]
|[[File:Sonichu15cover2019-min.png|120px|center]]
|[[File:Sonichu book 0 hd cover by nightstarrosechu2891 dg6o1j5-pre.jpg|120px|center]]
|The original cover did not credit Trickie or ''Rosechu's Story''.<br>For the 2019 revision, Chris scribbled a note in the corner reading: "Also complimenting of Trickie's book, "Rosechu's Story", with permission to quote that book for this one." In 2023, the comic number was altered to "0 HD".
|-
|1
|[[File:SchuComic15Page1 draft.png|120px|frameless|center|text-bottom]]
|[[File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p1.jpg|120px|center]]
|
|[[Rosechu]]'s tail as a Raichu is blunt in the 2017 original to show she is a natural female; her tail as a Pikachu is heart-shaped for the same reason. (This itself [[continuity|retconned]] [[Sonichu 0]], which depicted the Raichu with a pointed tail because Nintendo did not draw male and female Raichus differently in [[2000]].) In Chris's 2019 revision, he followed Idea Guy's canon and revised the page to depict the Pikachu/Raichu with pointed tails (by drawing the tails on a separate page, cutting them out and gluing them over the original versions).
|-
|9
|[[File:SchuComic15Page9_draft.jpg|120px|frameless|center|text-bottom]]
|[[File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p9.jpg|120px|center]]
|
|Minor date change. The 2017 version gives 14 February 2003, as the date Rosechu and Sonichu meet; the 2019 version is revised to 7 February. Chris wrote the seven on a slip of paper and glued it over the previous date.
|}
</center>
<center>
{| class="wikitable collapsible" width="600"
|-
!Dialogue in ''Rosechu's Story''
!Revised in ''Sonichu'' 15
|-
|"Yeah, right"
|"Ch-yeah, right"
|-
|"another Pokemon like me just showing up at the door?"
|"another Pokemon for my rose just showing up at the door?"
|-
|"Woah"
|"Woahly"
|-
|"For the love of -"
|"For the love of Arceus!"
|-
|"Seriously, Kel?? You never once noticed my tail is pointed?!"
|"Seriously, Kel?? You never once noticed my tail is pointed?! Much less, my [[Pickle|wee-wee]]?"
|-
|"You sure put the little one through the wringer!"
|"You sure put the little on [sic] through the wringer! Her X-rays showed no fractured or broken bones at all."
|}
</center>
 
==Gallery==
<center><gallery>
CWC's Sonichu 15 vs Trickie's Rosechu's Story fancomic.png|Comparing art between ''Sonichu'' #15 and fan comic ''Rosechu's Story''.
CWC's Sonichu 15 vs Trickie's Rosechu's Story fancomic 2.png|An entire page is taken from ''Rosechu's Story'', down to the dialogue.
Chris pen grip 2019.jpg|Chris copying Rosechu's Story. Note the awkward pen grip + gym gloves hampering his drawing ability.
File:Trickiechu.jpg|"Trickiechu", a [[TSSSF]] card made by Chris, on the creator of ''Rosechu's Story''.
</gallery></center>


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Well, that's pretty much what I expected.
Rosechu's Story creator Trickie, upon discovering that Chris ripped off her comic.[1]
Sonichu #15
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Cover Date: 16 October 2017
Page Count: 60 (so far)
Episodes: 1
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Sonichu #0 HD, previously known as Sonichu #15, is the seventeenth issue of Sonichu. It is a mix of material plagiarised from a fan comic titled Rosechu's Story and lore brainwashed into Chris by the Idea Guys. Its cover is an alternate version of the infamous "Zap to the extreme!" cover on Sonichu #0, with a transgender Chris directing Sonichu, who responds, "Yes, I will!! Thank you, mother!!!"; Chris believes that his art has improved in the thirteen years between the two books.[2]

Due to Chris's recent legal troubles, it initially seemed that the issue would not be completed anytime soon. His return to DeviantArt and renumbering of the comic, however, makes it seem that he is planning on resuming work.

Production notes

Sonichu 15 was announced by Chris on 17 October 2017 directly after he completed Sonichu #12, put on hold during the Idea Guys saga, and resumed in July 2019 until Chris lost interest and abandoned the comic again.

It was intended as a "Retelling of the Classic First Three Episodes, BUT with More Details; More Commentary and Dialogue from Sonichu and Rosechu",[3] Days before the announcement, Chris learned of the fan comic Rosechu's Story.[4] Reading it on Tumblr, he enjoyed its story so much he decided to copy it for Sonichu 15, acknowledging the source material with a hastily scribbled note on the front cover.

Well, Christine has already indicated to me that she considers [Rosechu's Story] to be part of the chronicled history of the electric hedgehogs, and that all this stuff was in her brain somewhere, it just didn't come out until she read it in my comic. So even if I did make a fuss about it, she probably would've done this anyway and the only difference would be that I wouldn't get credit for it at all.
Rosechu's Story creator Trickie.[5]
Misleading advertising. A cover Chris drew for Rosechu's Story, with only the spine and fine print on the back cover crediting the actual author and illustrator.

In addition to ripping off Rosechu's Story, Chris also decided to monetize it for himself. In June 2019, Chris downloaded Rosechu's Story, drew a cover for it in his own artstyle, had it printed as a book through Lulu, and placed it into a lot of Sonichu comics for sale on Ebay[6] and also sold copies through Cwcvilleshopping.com.

In August 2023, Chris uploaded a batch of artwork to his NightStarRosechu2891 DeviantART account. Among those were previously-unreleased colorized versions, and one unreleased page, of the comic. A revised version of the cover was also among the batch; in the newest cover, Chris had altered the comic number, by gluing a slip of paper on top of the page, changing the previous #15 to #0 HD.

Plot

Sonichu mourning his parents' death, an example of the lore introduced by the Idea Guys.

Chris's weaknesses at writing stories stands in contrast to the fan favorite Rosechu's Story. Despite extensively copying its scenes, Chris still managed to water down the comic's storyline and emotional impact by ignoring scenes of character conflict, inserting walls of text, revising dialogue to his taste, and breaking up the story flow by adding pages detailing an irrelevant portion of Sonichu's day.

Left, original tail. Right, Chris physically altered the page to conform with lore from the Idea Guys.

His most noteworthy change to the plot was in deciding to depict the Raichu with a blunt tail (in the Pokémon games, this marks a Raichu as female), even though Rosechu's Story's plot depended on Rosechu having been born male, in an obvious attempt to put his foot down on the much-debated-and-ridiculed topic of Rosechu's birth gender. However, the Idea Guys subsequently brainwashed Chris into believing that he was wrong and that Rosechu was really born male,[7] so Chris reversed his alteration in a 2019 revision.

Partway through Sonichu 15, at page 33, Chris ran out of material to adapt from Rosechu's Story and begins to tell Sonichu's backstory, featuring lore the Idea Guys had brainwashed into him during one of the comic's hiatuses, one example being Sonichu's parents had been gassed to death by Team Rocket's Koffing Pokémon. Art-wise, as soon as he shifted from copying Trickie's scenes, the composition instantly reverted back to Chris's typical style of characters with minimal backgrounds surrounded by text.

Comic pages

Pages from Sonichu 15

Revisions

Sonichu #15 Version Comparison
Page Number 2017 Version 2019 Version 2023 Version Notes
Cover
Sonichu - Issue 15, Cover.jpg
Sonichu15cover2019-min.png
Sonichu book 0 hd cover by nightstarrosechu2891 dg6o1j5-pre.jpg
The original cover did not credit Trickie or Rosechu's Story.
For the 2019 revision, Chris scribbled a note in the corner reading: "Also complimenting of Trickie's book, "Rosechu's Story", with permission to quote that book for this one." In 2023, the comic number was altered to "0 HD".
1
SchuComic15Page1 draft.png
Sonichu15-2019draft-p1.jpg
Rosechu's tail as a Raichu is blunt in the 2017 original to show she is a natural female; her tail as a Pikachu is heart-shaped for the same reason. (This itself retconned Sonichu 0, which depicted the Raichu with a pointed tail because Nintendo did not draw male and female Raichus differently in 2000.) In Chris's 2019 revision, he followed Idea Guy's canon and revised the page to depict the Pikachu/Raichu with pointed tails (by drawing the tails on a separate page, cutting them out and gluing them over the original versions).
9
SchuComic15Page9 draft.jpg
Sonichu15-2019draft-p9.jpg
Minor date change. The 2017 version gives 14 February 2003, as the date Rosechu and Sonichu meet; the 2019 version is revised to 7 February. Chris wrote the seven on a slip of paper and glued it over the previous date.
Dialogue in Rosechu's Story Revised in Sonichu 15
"Yeah, right" "Ch-yeah, right"
"another Pokemon like me just showing up at the door?" "another Pokemon for my rose just showing up at the door?"
"Woah" "Woahly"
"For the love of -" "For the love of Arceus!"
"Seriously, Kel?? You never once noticed my tail is pointed?!" "Seriously, Kel?? You never once noticed my tail is pointed?! Much less, my wee-wee?"
"You sure put the little one through the wringer!" "You sure put the little on [sic] through the wringer! Her X-rays showed no fractured or broken bones at all."

Gallery

Sources