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Perhaps I titled it wrong. What I was trying to get at is, if you're going to put something like 'He/she suddenly did x without thinking etc', a certain amount of figurative ceremony can solidify it, and make it seems less throwaway. Got-dang mental block! --[[User:Jump|Jump]] 03:24, 12 July 2010 (UTC) | Perhaps I titled it wrong. What I was trying to get at is, if you're going to put something like 'He/she suddenly did x without thinking etc', a certain amount of figurative ceremony can solidify it, and make it seems less throwaway. Got-dang mental block! --[[User:Jump|Jump]] 03:24, 12 July 2010 (UTC) | ||
The idea regarding her fast character change from rebel to nut was that its her old Creepichu personality coming back to assert itself over the more reasonable Kitty personality. I still think there's plenty of overlap: what reasonable person ''wouldn't'' want to murder Robbie? I admit that I'm addicted to obscure references. So your feedback has been inputed and I thank you for your honesty. Bill, that wasn't actually the end; I've got one more chapter planned. The story needs a denouement, and Magi-Chan still has some torture coming his way. --[[User:Manwithoutabody|manwithoutabody]] 7:45, 12 July 2010 (CEST) | |||
Looking forward to it. You handle criticism well, especially considering I was rambling somewhat incoherently. --[[User:Jump|Jump]] 20:09, 12 July 2010 (UTC) | |||
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I think the "Just Because" traps were all replaced by the "Because she's Creepychu" reveal at the end. Bill Lumburg 03:06, 12 July 2010 (UTC)
Perhaps I titled it wrong. What I was trying to get at is, if you're going to put something like 'He/she suddenly did x without thinking etc', a certain amount of figurative ceremony can solidify it, and make it seems less throwaway. Got-dang mental block! --Jump 03:24, 12 July 2010 (UTC)
The idea regarding her fast character change from rebel to nut was that its her old Creepichu personality coming back to assert itself over the more reasonable Kitty personality. I still think there's plenty of overlap: what reasonable person wouldn't want to murder Robbie? I admit that I'm addicted to obscure references. So your feedback has been inputed and I thank you for your honesty. Bill, that wasn't actually the end; I've got one more chapter planned. The story needs a denouement, and Magi-Chan still has some torture coming his way. --manwithoutabody 7:45, 12 July 2010 (CEST)
Looking forward to it. You handle criticism well, especially considering I was rambling somewhat incoherently. --Jump 20:09, 12 July 2010 (UTC)