User talk:Old meme

Sure thing. I'll take a look at it now. Out of curiosity (and to make sure no content is being removed), do you have a list of the pages you're merging? Freecell (t/c) 12:56, 13 May 2011 (PDT)

Cool. I'll leave a message as soon as I'm done. Freecell (t/c) 13:10, 13 May 2011 (PDT)

All done

Sorry it took so long. A guy on my floor wanted to get something to eat before everything closed. I've just finished going over the article and I think it's worth moving to mainspace. There were a couple things I wasn't sure about, though. Most are pretty minor.

1. Mailbag vs mailbag - I don't know if this should be capitalised or not (it isn't capitalised on your page)
2. "Clearly being relieved of their Asperger's did wonders for their minds" - This was in between two sentences in parentheses, so I don't know where to put it.
3. The physical description of Mitch - I wasn't sure if this was necessary. Nobody else got one and there's a picture of him right there. I took it out, but you can put it back if you think it's worth it.
4. "They may have been created in response to the then-latest issue of Asperchu, as immediately following Chris's earlier retcons in Sonichu 10, Asperchu had continued as normal, featuring the funeral of the Chaotic Combo and introducing the character of Rosechu into the comic for the first time. Whether they were made to also retcon the Asperchu version of Rosechu into another character or whether they were just made for the sake of demonizing Alec further remains unknown." - I don't follow the train of thought here.
5. "Forced to run on hamster wheel" - Note that one of the basement chus was paraplegic. If he said that, it's fine, but I can't find anything where he says they were forced to do anything.
6. I made the basement chu images into a gallery because they looked strange without a proper border. The problem with that is that I had to remove some text, and even with less text it still looks like too much. I might look into that later or something.
7. "And finally, Mitch also existed to contradict Chris's attempts at retconning Asperchu as much as possible." - I removed that paragraph because it just seemed a bit redundant. You can put it back if you want.
8. I left in the parts about Alec being a rapist, but I'm not sure if they should be there or not, seeing as Chris retconned/clarified that.

Overall, I think the page was pretty solid, and it transitioned well enough between the topics for it to work as a single page. However, because making the merge requires moving pages and making redirects out of existing pages, you'll have to get an admin or QC Jerkop to make the move for you (otherwise it causes problems with record keeping). While I physically CAN do those things, Champ made it abundantly clear that I'll get banned if I use those abilities when not responding to vandalism. I can't think of any QC jerkops off the top of my head, so I guess you'll have to ask Champ. Freecell (t/c) 16:04, 13 May 2011 (PDT)

I'll take a look at the new stuff, but I can't at the moment. I'll let you know when I'm done. Freecell (t/c) 01:16, 22 June 2011 (PDT)

Re: your page

I can't think of a good name for it, so I might ask Alec Benson Leary himself if he can think of a good name. A bit unorthodox but I figure Alec can come up with a clever name for the page. Also, you're welcome to make other sandboxes, for example, you can make User:Old_meme/Sandbox2 if you want to work on something else. Just don't make a zillion subpages because from my experience, it's really easy to lose track what's on what.--Champthom 01:43, 26 May 2011 (PDT)

• Surely "Extreme Electric Makeover" is the perfect title? Eamoo 07:46, 26 May 2011 (PDT)

• Oh man, that's kinda good but not intuitive to someone looking it up. Anyways, I finally got around to moving stuff. Sorry for the delay, dude, just been busy with other projects. Keep contributing to the CWCki, your work is promising, Old meme.--Champthom 03:23, 16 June 2011 (PDT)

Sonichu (the game)

Obviously before you make any changes to the Sonichu (game) page, make a draft of it first. Someone tried that before, that is merging all the Sonichu games into the one page, and it was messy, but if it's well done, I might consider merging. Personally I'm a bit skeptical, but you could convince me otherwise.--Champthom 05:47, 18 June 2011 (PDT)

Critiques

Here's the first one for your Samurai Pizza Bots draft, hopefully it's constructive enough criticism with stuff to keep in mind when editing in general. I'll get to your other two sometimes soon, maybe tomorrow. --Champthom 07:10, 25 June 2011 (PDT)