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*Welcome!-[[User:Trombonista|trombonista]] 16:34, 2 April 2010 (UTC)


Thanks, it's good to be here. : ) -[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 3:29 3 April 2010 (EST)
*Thanks, it's good to be here. : ) -[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 3:29, 3 April 2010 (EST)
 
==Stuff==
*Can I be awarded some of those awesome templates when your done with them? Thanks :) --[[User:YawningSquirtleRedux|YawningSquirtleRedux]] 22:25, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
 
*Sure, I'm gonna put the criteria for them in the discussion panels. It may be subject to change overtime, as well. Still, give yourself whichever one you think you've earned. : ) --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 22:37, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
 
:*Legend. --[[User:YawningSquirtleRedux|YawningSquirtleRedux]] 23:28, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
 
:*I'm thinking of expanding the Heroic criteria to Wiki bigshots (Admins, Jerkops, etc.). Seeing your current awards, Hero seems like it would fit ya the best. --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 23:32, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
::*Why ta. I'll take hero then, thank you very much. --[[User:YawningSquirtleRedux|YawningSquirtleRedux]] 23:34, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
 
== Re:Halo Shield Icons ==
 
I don't think I've done enough to earn the Heroic badge, but thanks! '''[[User:Lime|<font color="limegreen">L</font>]][[User_talk:Lime|<font color="limegreen">i</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Lime|<font color="limegreen">m</font>]][[nudes|<font color="limegreen">e</font>]]''' 03:40, 26 April 2010 (UTC)
 
== Hello ==
 
I've been working on a sonichu comic and i would like some criticism regarding the designs for the sonees and roseys. seeing how you hate them so much, if i see that you like them or not hate them means that i am on the right track.
[[File:Sonichu040.jpg|300px| in order from top to bottom: a more proportionate chris version; chris's TRUE and HONEST sonee and rosey; my version.]]
Sorry for bothering.
[[User:J0haely|J0haely]] 01:16, 17 May 2010 (UTC)
 
I'm not going to lie, I even find the top two, proportionate ones, infuriatingly disgusting. The bottom two are great though. I honestly do not feel the urge to kill them. You're doing good and you're off to a good start. : ) --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 14:34, 17 May 2010 (UTC)
 
since i already bothered you with the other design, i made a redesing for the three abominations known as sonichu's children. although pretty everybody hates them, i chose you since you hate them so much. tell me whatcha think as i'm planning on making a  troll comic on them (more especifically finish the sonichu and rosechu christmas because chris is too much of a lazy fuck to do so himself)
[[File:Cerah redone.jpg|300px|Cerah in her rosey rosechu and incredible lioness, since her mother showers to much affection to christine and so she decides to run away...on christmas day!]]
[[File:Christine redone.jpg|300px|christine. she would still be a narcicist. is she a pweety woesey?]]
[[File:Robbie redone.jpg|300px|Robbie. he would still have his speech impedment, butt only he would be saying yay all the time. he would be like chris minus the autism]]
 
i'm very sorry if i'm bothering you with this.[[User:J0haely|J0haely]] 02:46, 21 May 2010 (UTC)
 
No problem, I don't mind giving my opinion on your drawings. The three all look good to me. Probably because ya drew the three Sonichu children in a more realistic sense (as realistic as "Sonichu" can be at least). They don't have that retarded, blank, look on their faces & the extremely deformed bodies. The character designs are well done. : ) --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 20:09, 21 May 2010 (UTC)
 
Hey Alc. i have some more pictures of sonees that i would like your opinion on. As you may know, me and some guys from here (Bill Lumburg included) been working on a project and i'm incharge of the art. Since you hate Sonees and Roseys the most i hope you don't mind if i use you (that sounds so
wrong) as a focus...person to see how are my sonee and rosey designs (like the ones i've shown you before)
[[File:Sonee rosey redesigns.jpg|300px| These are the designs for both the sonees as how they would look (the lower left corner) and something which would be called proto-sonees/roseys. the proto-sonees are based chris's many incosistent designs and would act the way they do in "A very Sonichu adventure". in the story they would be a result of bad cloning and other unspeakable gentic experiments done by chris and a villain in order to amass an army of sonichus/rosechus/mutants.]]
[[File:Sonee mutations.jpg|300px|Because they are genetically flawed soem sonees would either not evolve and decay horribly, evolve into monstrocities or simply evolve malformed and in pain. i plan on making the last and first ends heartbreaking, so i ask you, do you feel sad for the lowest to in the row as in, would you put them out of their misery? If you consider them sad, then i'm on a right track]]
[[File:Sonee mutations 2.jpg|300px|And finally these are the things from Bill's drawing (the sonichu Brumak and the eggsack stalagtite.]]
 
Sorry for bothering you with this and i hope you couldd tell me what you think.[[User:J0haely|J0haely]] 07:59, 12 June 2010 (UTC)
 
I remember Bill putting a full picture of these designs on the Sonichu Adventure 2 talk page. I think they're awesome (especially the Brumak Sonee). The Larva Zapina is still kinda disgusting, but not for the retarded overly "cute" look the others have. Mainly because it's a larva : ) . As for the one you labled, "This one is kinda cute", it's because you drew it's eyes with some minor emotion in it. To solve that problem, just make the eyes blank and Chris-like. Great Work In All! --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 11:31, 12 June 2010 (UTC)
 
Oh, also, if you've ever played the first "Gears of War", you should make a 'Berserker' version of a Rosey (since they're all female anyway). It would go good with the Brumak Sonee : ) --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 11:33, 12 June 2010 (UTC)
 
The berserker is the thing being hugged by a sonee in the second picture. Do the deformed sonee and rosey in the second picture seem sad as in you would put them out of their misery or would you leave them to suffer? I want to know because i want to make redeemable, or at least sympathethic even Chris's Sonees and Roseys since they are in all the most hated characters and want to make their deaths and mutations at least somewhat sad. Although i already asked that question in the description so i apologize for repeating myself. and are my redesigns are good? I tried to make them cute but not try and force cuteness by giving them bows and stuff like that.[[User:J0haely|J0haely]] 14:00, 12 June 2010 (UTC)
 
:The bottom two in the second picture, yes, I'd want them dead for their own sakes. The Sonee with the third eye, I'd want to suffer. The worm Rosey, the same thing. If it's bow, cheeks , etc., were removed, than I could probably feel sorry for it. As for the redesigns, I think they look fine. There's no issue with them because they don't have retarded looks on their faces. : ) --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 21:36, 12 June 2010 (UTC)
::Oh great i was worried i made them "too cute" that they'll jump back to irritating. the worm thing is the same thing in bill's drawing asking for the sweet release of death. and maybe you wouldn't like these retarded sonees because some of them would not be able to experience pain and would have the same expression as the one creepychu was eating.[[User:J0haely|J0haely]] 22:34, 12 June 2010 (UTC)
:::By the way, just to clarify, the redesigns are the two on the bottom of the first picture, right? That and the ones on the top left of the page? Those are the ones I think are okay. The Prototype ones (on the right of the image) all look retarded still (though they're Chris's, so they should). Same with the two to the right of the redesigns on the top of the first panel. Hope that was all legible. : ) --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 22:54, 12 June 2010 (UTC)
::::Yeah that's how it is. redesigns are the ones on the lower left and the ones looking with fear and curisity to the way chris drew them. what do you think would be chris reactions to mine, aside form that they are not as good as his.[[User:J0haely|J0haely]] 23:04, 12 June 2010 (UTC)
The one labeled "cute" I had originally based off of Christine. Me and J0 basically took all the inconsistent sonee and rosey designs Chris made. I'm actually quite amused by the irony here; the artist for A very Sonichu Adventure is probably the only person who genuinely pities them. [[User:Bill Lumburg|Bill Lumburg]] 16:29, 12 June 2010 (UTC)
:when you mention it, she does resemble her somewhat.[[User:J0haely|J0haely]] 16:37, 12 June 2010 (UTC)
 
== Hooray! ==
 
The mark of shame has disapeared! lets rejoice![[User:J0haely|J0haely]] 02:20, 1 June 2010 (UTC)
 
Yep : ) Now I feel better about myself. Well, at least for the time being. --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 05:36, 4 June 2010 (UTC)
:I think Alcoholic Legend is a pretty cool guy. eh eats Sonees and doesn’t afraid of anything.[[User:J0haely|J0haely]] 00:42, 6 June 2010 (UTC)
 
== Just sayin'. ==
 
Dude, I'm loving your stories. I stayed up late at night reading them. Well done! [[User:DonnieDarko|DonnieDarko]] 05:45, 17 June 2010 (UTC)DonnieDarko
 
:*Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it a lot. It's always a good thing to hear if someone enjoys your stories. : ) --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 23:29, 17 June 2010 (UTC)
 
Each one is more horrible than the next. the images just keep repeating in my head and make me sick to my stomach, yet i can't stop reading and waiting anxiously for the next chapter! please alcoholic legend tell me what the fuck is wrong with me?![[User:J0haely|J0haely]] 05:56, 17 June 2010 (UTC)
 
:*Nothing's wrong with you at all. If there's a real person with problems here, it's me. : )  Also, don't forget, it's Sonees & Roseys we're dealing with here. Everyone, on some level, wants to see those little, retarded, furfags get torn apart brutally. --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 23:29, 17 June 2010 (UTC)
:*I wasn't bothered in the slightest--I was reminded of HTF around the part where the soda caused the Rosey to mutate.  I was a little annoyed that you killed off the Champion of Laughyland rather than allow him to go on living with the trauma inflicted upon him, but I hope that the Beast and at least the blind and crippled Rosey survive just to add to the horror.
::*Having him killed off was something I thought about for a bit. Sorry if you didn't like how it turned out. Don't worry though, the "Prisoner Sonee" will be soon to take his place as the traumatized baby. : ) --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 19:39, 18 June 2010 (UTC)
:Either way the imagery is disturbing. You could be a great horror writer some day.[[User:J0haely|J0haely]] 00:15, 18 June 2010 (UTC)
:J0h's right. Seriously. Lovecraft got nothing on you. --[[User:Edward|Edward]] 00:24, 18 June 2010 (UTC)
::Seriously. You'd have Lovecraft running to his mommy. Oh wait... -- [[User:DonnieDarko|DonnieDarko]]
:::Lovecraft wrote about intrepid researchers whose inquiring minds either led them, or tricked them into learning far too much about the universe. His stories were not grindhouse level baby murder porn for cheap shocks. The closest comparison that could be made would be related to the Lovecraft's own racism and fear of blacks, and this author's obviously authentic-and-not-forced-whatsoever hate for furries. [[User:Brofose|Brofose]] 14:09, 13 July 2010 (UTC)
 
I'd love to write a story of my own that's like this.  Can I have permission to do so?--[[User:MoarLurk|MoarLurk]] 07:16, 18 June 2010 (UTC)
:*Go right ahead, I'd love to see it. Finally being able to read a story where Sonees, Roseys, or the other furfags are tortured would be quite enjoyable for me. If it doesn't involve any of them, still, go ahead and write whatever you feel like. : ) --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 19:39, 18 June 2010 (UTC)
 
== Hey Alc ==
It's me. Listen, SoRichlyConsumeOf commented on the talk page for AVSA2, and said that it technically wasn't "interactive" so much as just first person. He suggested putting it in a Choose your own Adventure type format. I don't know about you, but I think it's a great idea. Each of the little fuckers could have multiple deaths! It'd definitely increase the re-read value. I'd go for it myself. --[[User:Edward|Edward]] 19:52, 1 July 2010 (UTC)
 
 
 
== Something i would like an opinion on ==
 
[[file:Bobby and sonee and rosey.jpg|300px]] i made some concept art for our sonichu comic. its bobby sonichu, the "cured" wild asperchu clone. in our story he is a phycotic mad scientist and the one that will make the sonees and roseys everybody loves to murder horribly. i'm showing this to you for two reasons. one he may end up being your favorite character, although i would know if we made him a complete monster if even you recoil in disgust towards what he does to the sonees, and two, some of the things he does to the sonees and roseys are inspire by a sonichu adventure 1 and 2. The small squares are the cwcola-monster rosey and the rosey-sonee. they can't stop smiling even in pain.
:TL;DR: tell me what you think please.[[User:J0haely|J0haely]] 14:10, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
::That's fairly close to what I had planned for him, only difference is that Chris will use his new ability(which is not an inborn power but one that requires refinement and devotion) to draw them into existence.  However, due to the fact that he never practices, he isn't able to call a Sonichu or Rosechu into reality and simply draws Sonees and Roseys.--[[User:MoarLurk|MoarLurk]] 18:10, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
 
::I really like the idea for Bobby Sonichu. He's already my favorite, knowing what he does to the little furfags. : ) The drawings of the Sonee-Rosey, Pumpkin Freak, & the melted Sonee are also good by me. Those, along with your colored Pumpkin Rosey, made my day. : ) --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 22:18, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
:::though he won't do most of those things for pure sadistic joy like the protagonist does in a sonichu adventure, but mostly FOR SCIENCE! but certain things from the adventure will be adapted like "mr. bucket" to dispose of the bodies and feed the sonees, as you could see the rosey-sonee, but he won't cut its tongue and will make it an hermafrodite, and so on. your sick mind may actually help create one of the most interesting yet simple characters for our story.[[User:J0haely|J0haely]] 22:27, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
::::Gotta admit, I really like how you're using some of my ideas and putting your own spin to it. Mixes things up a bit. : )  I'm looking forward to reading your series once it begins. --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 22:54, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
 
===Some adaptated things===
 
Here is my rendition, that would hopefully be part of the main comic, of some elements from sonichu adventure '''2'''! I changed some of them though. "Mr. Bucket" is now used to despose of dead proto-sonees and proto-roseys (i know you would have enjoyed of them being alive though) to be fed to the farmed prosees who live in a copy of laughyland, except without dobermans. and the origin of the soney-rosey is fleshed out. though i feel like i gave the prosees to much refinement and now, IMHO actually look a little bit endearing, though i was aiming for just simpathethic (although i shouldn't worry for that part with you :P). I hope you like it, tell me what you think!
 
[[File:The birth of the rosey-sonee 1.jpg|400px]][[File:The birth of the rosey-sonee 2.jpg|400px]][[File:The birth of the rosey-sonee 3.jpg|400px]]
:[[User:J0haely|J0haely]] 05:45, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
 
I like this whole thing a lot (the Nursery being a breeding farm, the "Mister Bucket" disposing babies, etc.). The Sonee & Rosey playing tag combined with the Sonee-Rosey thing made it all the better for me. Very deranged and well done J0. : ) --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 01:01, 24 June 2010 (UTC)
:do the protos still seem souless, or have i given them more "spark" than what chris has.[[User:J0haely|J0haely]] 01:13, 24 June 2010 (UTC)
::Honestly, yes, I thought that the two playing tag were slightly more realistic. Remember, Chris always draws these things 2-dimensionally (I hope that makes sense). They're always flat and facing the reader (which is one reason I hate them so). If you're going for retarded, have them face the reader, if you want something more believable, do what you've been doing. : ) --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 01:20, 24 June 2010 (UTC)
::Oh, also, they have actual facial expressions, you know, like actual living creatures. --[[User:Alcoholic Legend|Alcoholic Legend]] 01:21, 24 June 2010 (UTC)
:::Great! I made myself a personal challenge: to see if i could make even the most hated character (the sonee, roseys and sonichu's children) even somewhat likeable or sympathethic. Knowing that even you feel that they are not irritating like that, means that i have suceeded and so has my writing. thought i left the permanent ":3" face on the sonees and the bow and skirts on the roseys so they still have a piece of chris in them.[[User:J0haely|J0haely]] 01:36, 24 June 2010 (UTC)
 
===This concerns all of us, man===
I just think you should know that Cogs is enacting a new policy regarding fan works that can be read [[CWCki:Policy|here]].  Also, there's some fairly ugly (and barely literate) backlash going on against the torture stories happening at the discussion page on ''Afternoon'', and some support would be greatly appreciated.  If you'd like to stay out of it, though, I completely understand. --[[User:Manwithoutabody|manwithoutabody]] 19:43, 12 July 2010 (CEST)
 
Your calvary isn't going to save you or your pornography. [[User:DrShoggoth|DrShoggoth]] 23:48, 12 July 2010 (UTC)
 
Sorry to see the Sonichu Adventure fics gone.  I want to ask if you'll ever post them elsewhere?  I really want to see Sonichu Adventure 2 get finished. --[[User:Anomaly188|Anomaly188]] 21:42, 21 July 2010 (UTC)
 
Ah, damn, there was more? I just joined this past week, and thought thoe ones y'had up there were creepy, in an awesome way, and wanted more. --[[User:Xavier orona|Xavier orona]] 01:33, 20 August 2010 (PDT)
 
===Very Sonichu Adventure===
I wanted to ask if there's a chance you might post ''A Very Sonichu Adventure'' 1 and 2 on deivantart or someplace similar.  I and other fans of your work were disappointed to see the fan work page go and are still waiting to see how CWCVille Nursery will end.  Please don't abandon these fics.  They were lyrical works of art.  --[[User:Anomaly188|Anomaly188]] 00:56, 20 August 2010 (PDT)

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  • Can I be awarded some of those awesome templates when your done with them? Thanks :) --YawningSquirtleRedux 22:25, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
  • Sure, I'm gonna put the criteria for them in the discussion panels. It may be subject to change overtime, as well. Still, give yourself whichever one you think you've earned. : ) --Alcoholic Legend 22:37, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
  • I'm thinking of expanding the Heroic criteria to Wiki bigshots (Admins, Jerkops, etc.). Seeing your current awards, Hero seems like it would fit ya the best. --Alcoholic Legend 23:32, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

Re:Halo Shield Icons

I don't think I've done enough to earn the Heroic badge, but thanks! Lime 03:40, 26 April 2010 (UTC)

Hello

I've been working on a sonichu comic and i would like some criticism regarding the designs for the sonees and roseys. seeing how you hate them so much, if i see that you like them or not hate them means that i am on the right track. in order from top to bottom: a more proportionate chris version; chris's TRUE and HONEST sonee and rosey; my version. Sorry for bothering. J0haely 01:16, 17 May 2010 (UTC)

I'm not going to lie, I even find the top two, proportionate ones, infuriatingly disgusting. The bottom two are great though. I honestly do not feel the urge to kill them. You're doing good and you're off to a good start. : ) --Alcoholic Legend 14:34, 17 May 2010 (UTC)

since i already bothered you with the other design, i made a redesing for the three abominations known as sonichu's children. although pretty everybody hates them, i chose you since you hate them so much. tell me whatcha think as i'm planning on making a troll comic on them (more especifically finish the sonichu and rosechu christmas because chris is too much of a lazy fuck to do so himself) Cerah in her rosey rosechu and incredible lioness, since her mother showers to much affection to christine and so she decides to run away...on christmas day! christine. she would still be a narcicist. is she a pweety woesey? Robbie. he would still have his speech impedment, butt only he would be saying yay all the time. he would be like chris minus the autism

i'm very sorry if i'm bothering you with this.J0haely 02:46, 21 May 2010 (UTC)

No problem, I don't mind giving my opinion on your drawings. The three all look good to me. Probably because ya drew the three Sonichu children in a more realistic sense (as realistic as "Sonichu" can be at least). They don't have that retarded, blank, look on their faces & the extremely deformed bodies. The character designs are well done. : ) --Alcoholic Legend 20:09, 21 May 2010 (UTC)

Hey Alc. i have some more pictures of sonees that i would like your opinion on. As you may know, me and some guys from here (Bill Lumburg included) been working on a project and i'm incharge of the art. Since you hate Sonees and Roseys the most i hope you don't mind if i use you (that sounds so wrong) as a focus...person to see how are my sonee and rosey designs (like the ones i've shown you before) These are the designs for both the sonees as how they would look (the lower left corner) and something which would be called proto-sonees/roseys. the proto-sonees are based chris's many incosistent designs and would act the way they do in "A very Sonichu adventure". in the story they would be a result of bad cloning and other unspeakable gentic experiments done by chris and a villain in order to amass an army of sonichus/rosechus/mutants. Because they are genetically flawed soem sonees would either not evolve and decay horribly, evolve into monstrocities or simply evolve malformed and in pain. i plan on making the last and first ends heartbreaking, so i ask you, do you feel sad for the lowest to in the row as in, would you put them out of their misery? If you consider them sad, then i'm on a right track And finally these are the things from Bill's drawing (the sonichu Brumak and the eggsack stalagtite.

Sorry for bothering you with this and i hope you couldd tell me what you think.J0haely 07:59, 12 June 2010 (UTC)

I remember Bill putting a full picture of these designs on the Sonichu Adventure 2 talk page. I think they're awesome (especially the Brumak Sonee). The Larva Zapina is still kinda disgusting, but not for the retarded overly "cute" look the others have. Mainly because it's a larva : ) . As for the one you labled, "This one is kinda cute", it's because you drew it's eyes with some minor emotion in it. To solve that problem, just make the eyes blank and Chris-like. Great Work In All! --Alcoholic Legend 11:31, 12 June 2010 (UTC)

Oh, also, if you've ever played the first "Gears of War", you should make a 'Berserker' version of a Rosey (since they're all female anyway). It would go good with the Brumak Sonee : ) --Alcoholic Legend 11:33, 12 June 2010 (UTC)

The berserker is the thing being hugged by a sonee in the second picture. Do the deformed sonee and rosey in the second picture seem sad as in you would put them out of their misery or would you leave them to suffer? I want to know because i want to make redeemable, or at least sympathethic even Chris's Sonees and Roseys since they are in all the most hated characters and want to make their deaths and mutations at least somewhat sad. Although i already asked that question in the description so i apologize for repeating myself. and are my redesigns are good? I tried to make them cute but not try and force cuteness by giving them bows and stuff like that.J0haely 14:00, 12 June 2010 (UTC)

The bottom two in the second picture, yes, I'd want them dead for their own sakes. The Sonee with the third eye, I'd want to suffer. The worm Rosey, the same thing. If it's bow, cheeks , etc., were removed, than I could probably feel sorry for it. As for the redesigns, I think they look fine. There's no issue with them because they don't have retarded looks on their faces. : ) --Alcoholic Legend 21:36, 12 June 2010 (UTC)
Oh great i was worried i made them "too cute" that they'll jump back to irritating. the worm thing is the same thing in bill's drawing asking for the sweet release of death. and maybe you wouldn't like these retarded sonees because some of them would not be able to experience pain and would have the same expression as the one creepychu was eating.J0haely 22:34, 12 June 2010 (UTC)
By the way, just to clarify, the redesigns are the two on the bottom of the first picture, right? That and the ones on the top left of the page? Those are the ones I think are okay. The Prototype ones (on the right of the image) all look retarded still (though they're Chris's, so they should). Same with the two to the right of the redesigns on the top of the first panel. Hope that was all legible. : ) --Alcoholic Legend 22:54, 12 June 2010 (UTC)
Yeah that's how it is. redesigns are the ones on the lower left and the ones looking with fear and curisity to the way chris drew them. what do you think would be chris reactions to mine, aside form that they are not as good as his.J0haely 23:04, 12 June 2010 (UTC)

The one labeled "cute" I had originally based off of Christine. Me and J0 basically took all the inconsistent sonee and rosey designs Chris made. I'm actually quite amused by the irony here; the artist for A very Sonichu Adventure is probably the only person who genuinely pities them. Bill Lumburg 16:29, 12 June 2010 (UTC)

when you mention it, she does resemble her somewhat.J0haely 16:37, 12 June 2010 (UTC)

Hooray!

The mark of shame has disapeared! lets rejoice!J0haely 02:20, 1 June 2010 (UTC)

Yep : ) Now I feel better about myself. Well, at least for the time being. --Alcoholic Legend 05:36, 4 June 2010 (UTC)

I think Alcoholic Legend is a pretty cool guy. eh eats Sonees and doesn’t afraid of anything.J0haely 00:42, 6 June 2010 (UTC)

Just sayin'.

Dude, I'm loving your stories. I stayed up late at night reading them. Well done! DonnieDarko 05:45, 17 June 2010 (UTC)DonnieDarko

  • Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it a lot. It's always a good thing to hear if someone enjoys your stories. : ) --Alcoholic Legend 23:29, 17 June 2010 (UTC)

Each one is more horrible than the next. the images just keep repeating in my head and make me sick to my stomach, yet i can't stop reading and waiting anxiously for the next chapter! please alcoholic legend tell me what the fuck is wrong with me?!J0haely 05:56, 17 June 2010 (UTC)

  • Nothing's wrong with you at all. If there's a real person with problems here, it's me. : ) Also, don't forget, it's Sonees & Roseys we're dealing with here. Everyone, on some level, wants to see those little, retarded, furfags get torn apart brutally. --Alcoholic Legend 23:29, 17 June 2010 (UTC)
  • I wasn't bothered in the slightest--I was reminded of HTF around the part where the soda caused the Rosey to mutate. I was a little annoyed that you killed off the Champion of Laughyland rather than allow him to go on living with the trauma inflicted upon him, but I hope that the Beast and at least the blind and crippled Rosey survive just to add to the horror.
  • Having him killed off was something I thought about for a bit. Sorry if you didn't like how it turned out. Don't worry though, the "Prisoner Sonee" will be soon to take his place as the traumatized baby. : ) --Alcoholic Legend 19:39, 18 June 2010 (UTC)
Either way the imagery is disturbing. You could be a great horror writer some day.J0haely 00:15, 18 June 2010 (UTC)
J0h's right. Seriously. Lovecraft got nothing on you. --Edward 00:24, 18 June 2010 (UTC)
Seriously. You'd have Lovecraft running to his mommy. Oh wait... -- DonnieDarko
Lovecraft wrote about intrepid researchers whose inquiring minds either led them, or tricked them into learning far too much about the universe. His stories were not grindhouse level baby murder porn for cheap shocks. The closest comparison that could be made would be related to the Lovecraft's own racism and fear of blacks, and this author's obviously authentic-and-not-forced-whatsoever hate for furries. Brofose 14:09, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

I'd love to write a story of my own that's like this. Can I have permission to do so?--MoarLurk 07:16, 18 June 2010 (UTC)

  • Go right ahead, I'd love to see it. Finally being able to read a story where Sonees, Roseys, or the other furfags are tortured would be quite enjoyable for me. If it doesn't involve any of them, still, go ahead and write whatever you feel like. : ) --Alcoholic Legend 19:39, 18 June 2010 (UTC)

Hey Alc

It's me. Listen, SoRichlyConsumeOf commented on the talk page for AVSA2, and said that it technically wasn't "interactive" so much as just first person. He suggested putting it in a Choose your own Adventure type format. I don't know about you, but I think it's a great idea. Each of the little fuckers could have multiple deaths! It'd definitely increase the re-read value. I'd go for it myself. --Edward 19:52, 1 July 2010 (UTC)


Something i would like an opinion on

Bobby and sonee and rosey.jpg i made some concept art for our sonichu comic. its bobby sonichu, the "cured" wild asperchu clone. in our story he is a phycotic mad scientist and the one that will make the sonees and roseys everybody loves to murder horribly. i'm showing this to you for two reasons. one he may end up being your favorite character, although i would know if we made him a complete monster if even you recoil in disgust towards what he does to the sonees, and two, some of the things he does to the sonees and roseys are inspire by a sonichu adventure 1 and 2. The small squares are the cwcola-monster rosey and the rosey-sonee. they can't stop smiling even in pain.

TL;DR: tell me what you think please.J0haely 14:10, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
That's fairly close to what I had planned for him, only difference is that Chris will use his new ability(which is not an inborn power but one that requires refinement and devotion) to draw them into existence. However, due to the fact that he never practices, he isn't able to call a Sonichu or Rosechu into reality and simply draws Sonees and Roseys.--MoarLurk 18:10, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
I really like the idea for Bobby Sonichu. He's already my favorite, knowing what he does to the little furfags. : ) The drawings of the Sonee-Rosey, Pumpkin Freak, & the melted Sonee are also good by me. Those, along with your colored Pumpkin Rosey, made my day. : ) --Alcoholic Legend 22:18, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
though he won't do most of those things for pure sadistic joy like the protagonist does in a sonichu adventure, but mostly FOR SCIENCE! but certain things from the adventure will be adapted like "mr. bucket" to dispose of the bodies and feed the sonees, as you could see the rosey-sonee, but he won't cut its tongue and will make it an hermafrodite, and so on. your sick mind may actually help create one of the most interesting yet simple characters for our story.J0haely 22:27, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
Gotta admit, I really like how you're using some of my ideas and putting your own spin to it. Mixes things up a bit. : ) I'm looking forward to reading your series once it begins. --Alcoholic Legend 22:54, 22 June 2010 (UTC)

Some adaptated things

Here is my rendition, that would hopefully be part of the main comic, of some elements from sonichu adventure 2! I changed some of them though. "Mr. Bucket" is now used to despose of dead proto-sonees and proto-roseys (i know you would have enjoyed of them being alive though) to be fed to the farmed prosees who live in a copy of laughyland, except without dobermans. and the origin of the soney-rosey is fleshed out. though i feel like i gave the prosees to much refinement and now, IMHO actually look a little bit endearing, though i was aiming for just simpathethic (although i shouldn't worry for that part with you :P). I hope you like it, tell me what you think!

File:The birth of the rosey-sonee 1.jpgFile:The birth of the rosey-sonee 2.jpgFile:The birth of the rosey-sonee 3.jpg

J0haely 05:45, 23 June 2010 (UTC)

I like this whole thing a lot (the Nursery being a breeding farm, the "Mister Bucket" disposing babies, etc.). The Sonee & Rosey playing tag combined with the Sonee-Rosey thing made it all the better for me. Very deranged and well done J0. : ) --Alcoholic Legend 01:01, 24 June 2010 (UTC)

do the protos still seem souless, or have i given them more "spark" than what chris has.J0haely 01:13, 24 June 2010 (UTC)
Honestly, yes, I thought that the two playing tag were slightly more realistic. Remember, Chris always draws these things 2-dimensionally (I hope that makes sense). They're always flat and facing the reader (which is one reason I hate them so). If you're going for retarded, have them face the reader, if you want something more believable, do what you've been doing. : ) --Alcoholic Legend 01:20, 24 June 2010 (UTC)
Oh, also, they have actual facial expressions, you know, like actual living creatures. --Alcoholic Legend 01:21, 24 June 2010 (UTC)
Great! I made myself a personal challenge: to see if i could make even the most hated character (the sonee, roseys and sonichu's children) even somewhat likeable or sympathethic. Knowing that even you feel that they are not irritating like that, means that i have suceeded and so has my writing. thought i left the permanent ":3" face on the sonees and the bow and skirts on the roseys so they still have a piece of chris in them.J0haely 01:36, 24 June 2010 (UTC)

This concerns all of us, man

I just think you should know that Cogs is enacting a new policy regarding fan works that can be read here. Also, there's some fairly ugly (and barely literate) backlash going on against the torture stories happening at the discussion page on Afternoon, and some support would be greatly appreciated. If you'd like to stay out of it, though, I completely understand. --manwithoutabody 19:43, 12 July 2010 (CEST)

Your calvary isn't going to save you or your pornography. DrShoggoth 23:48, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

Sorry to see the Sonichu Adventure fics gone. I want to ask if you'll ever post them elsewhere? I really want to see Sonichu Adventure 2 get finished. --Anomaly188 21:42, 21 July 2010 (UTC)

Ah, damn, there was more? I just joined this past week, and thought thoe ones y'had up there were creepy, in an awesome way, and wanted more. --Xavier orona 01:33, 20 August 2010 (PDT)

Very Sonichu Adventure

I wanted to ask if there's a chance you might post A Very Sonichu Adventure 1 and 2 on deivantart or someplace similar. I and other fans of your work were disappointed to see the fan work page go and are still waiting to see how CWCVille Nursery will end. Please don't abandon these fics. They were lyrical works of art. --Anomaly188 00:56, 20 August 2010 (PDT)