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{{quote| Well, that's pretty much what I expected.|''Rosechu's Story'' creator Trickie, upon discovering that Chris ripped off her comic.<ref>https://kiwifarms.net/threads/sonichu-15-page-1-dates.37088/page-4#post-2826274</ref>}}
{{quote| Well, that's pretty much what I expected.|''Rosechu's Story'' creator Trickie, upon discovering that Chris ripped off her comic.<ref>https://kiwifarms.net/threads/sonichu-15-page-1-dates.37088/page-4#post-2826274</ref>}}


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| cover          = Sonichu15cover2019-min.png
| cover          = Sonichu15cover2019-min.png
| coverdate      = 16 [[October 2017]]
| coverdate      = 16 [[October 2017]]
| finishedcomic  = ''In Progress''
| finishedcomic  = ''Superseded'' 17 [[December 2019]]
| pagecount      = 60 (incomplete so far)
| pagecount      = 60
| episodes      = 1 (incomplete so far)
| episodes      = 1  
| previous      = [[Sonichu 14|''Sonichu'' #14]]
| previous      = [[Sonichu 14|''Sonichu'' #14]]
| next          = [[Sonichu 16|''Sonichu'' #16]]
| next          = [[Sonichu 16|''Sonichu'' #16]]
}}
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'''''Sonichu'' #15''' is the 17th issue of Sonichu. It was announced by Chris on 17 October 2017, directly after he completed [[Sonichu 12|''Sonichu'' #12]]. It is a "Retelling of the Classic First Three Episodes, BUT with More Details; More Commentary and Dialogue from Sonichu and Rosechu".<ref>https://sonichu.com/cwcki/October_2017_Patreon_posts#Sonichu_.2315_Cover.21</ref> It is mainly influenced by both the comic Rosechu's Story and lore that [[Idea Guy]] put in Chris's head.
'''''Sonichu'' #15''' was the seventeenth issue of ''Sonichu''. It was announced by Chris on 17 October 2017, directly after he completed [[Sonichu 12|''Sonichu'' #12]]. It was intended as a "Retelling of the Classic First Three Episodes, BUT with More Details; More Commentary and Dialogue from Sonichu and Rosechu".<ref>https://sonichu.com/cwcki/October_2017_Patreon_posts#Sonichu_.2315_Cover.21</ref>, but the bulk of its content was either [[Things Chris has ripped off|plagiarised]] from ''[http://rosechustory.tumblr.com/ Rosechu's Story]'', a [[Tumblr]] fan comic, or else devised by the [[Idea Guys]]. Its cover is an alternate version of the infamous "Zap to the extreme!" cover on [[Sonichu 0|''Sonichu'' #0]], with a [[Tomgirl|transgender]] Chris directing Sonichu, who responds, "Yes, I will!! Thank you, mother!!!"; Chris believes that his art has improved in the thirteen years between the two books.<ref>https://sonichu.com/cwcki/October_2017_tweets#Sonichu_0_and_15_cover_comparison</ref> Work on the comic, after months of hiatus in mid-2019, came to an end on 17 December 2019 when Chris listed ''Rosechu's Story'' as [[TRUE and HONEST]] Sonichu canon at [[Chris and business|CWCVille Shopping]], selling it beside ''Sonichu'' 0 through 13 and making ''Sonichu'' 15 the second instalment in the series (after ''Sonichu'' 16) to be abandoned while incomplete.  
 
The cover is an alternate version of the infamous "Zap to the extreme!" cover on [[Sonichu 0|''Sonichu'' #0]], with a [[Tomgirl|transgender]] Chris directing Sonichu, who responds, "Yes, I will!! Thank you, mother!!!". Chris believes that his art has improved in the 13 years between the two books.<ref>https://sonichu.com/cwcki/October_2017_tweets#Sonichu_0_and_15_cover_comparison</ref>
 
==Plot==
{{Protip|Sonichu 15 is basically Rosechu's Story but drawn in Chris's superior artform. It's pretty much pointless to post the entire plot of this issue once it's published. Just read Rosechu's Story instead just to get a better idea on what this issue's plot will be.}}
===Ripping off Rosechu's Story comic===
 
Chris shamelessly [[Things Chris has ripped off|copied scenes, dialogue, and elements]] from a notable fan comic titled ''[http://rosechustory.tumblr.com/ Rosechu's Story]''. Chris had previously read this comic prior, and even commented about it on [[Tumblr]].
 
<gallery>
CWC's Sonichu 15 vs Trickie's Rosechu's Story fancomic.png|Comparing art between ''Sonichu'' #15 and fan comic ''Rosechu's Story''.
CWC's Sonichu 15 vs Trickie's Rosechu's Story fancomic 2.png|An entire page is taken from ''Rosechu's Story'', down to the dialogue.
Chris pen grip 2019.jpg|Chris copying Rosechu's Story. Note the awkward pen grip + gym gloves hampering his drawing ability.
</gallery>
 
{{clear}}
 
====Alterations====
 
Chris made some minor alterations.
 
*Dialogue - Chris makes several awkward dialogue changes.
 
<center>
{| class="wikitable collapsible" width="600"
|-
!Rosechu's Story
!Sonichu 15
|-
|"Yeah, right"
|"Ch-yeah, right"
|-
|"another Pokemon like me just showing up at the door?"
|"another Pokemon for my rose just showing up at the door?"
|-
|"Woah"
|"Woahly"
|-
|"For the love of -"
|"For the love of Arceus!"
|-
|"Seriously, Kel?? You never once noticed my tail is pointed?!"
|"Seriously, Kel?? You never once noticed my tail is pointed?! Much less, my [[Pickle|wee-wee]]?"
|-
|"You sure put the little one through the wringer!"
|"You sure put the little on [sic] through the wringer! Her X-rays showed no fractured or broken bones at all."
|}
</center>


*Plot points
[[File:Sonichu's parents gassed to death.png|thumb|left|Sonichu mourning his parents' death.]]
For the most part, Chris adapted ''Rosechu's Story'' faithfully, occasionally [[Chris and writing|revise dialogue]] to his taste. His most noteworthy change to the plot was in deciding to depict the Raichu with a blunt tail (in the ''Pokémon'' games, this marks a Raichu as female), even though ''Rosechu's Story'''s plot depended on [[Rosechu]] having been born male, in an obvious attempt to put his foot down on the much-debated and -ridiculed topic of Rosechu's birth gender. However, the [[Idea Guys]] convinced Chris that he was wrong and that Rosechu was really born male,<ref>[[December 2017 Facebook posts#Is Rosechu a transwoman?]]</ref> so Chris reversed his alteration in a 2019 revision. They also persuaded him that Sonichu's parents had been gassed to death by Team Rocket's coughing Pokémon.


Originally, one of Chris's alterations was in deciding to depict the Raichu in his version of the story with a blunt tail (in the ''Pokémon'' games, this marks a Raichu as female), even though ''Rosechu's Story'' has a plot point about [[Rosechu]] having been born as a male. This was obviously Chris attempting to put his foot down on the much-debated and ridiculed topic of Rosechu's birth gender. However, [[Idea Guy]] convinced Chris that he was wrong and that Rosechu was really born a male<ref>[[December 2017 Facebook posts#Is Rosechu a transwoman?]]</ref>, so Chris reversed his alteration in a 2019 revision.
{{clear}}
===Other storylines===
[[File:Sonichu's parents gassed to death.png|thumb|Sonichu mourning the death of his parents, gassed to death.]]
Idea Guy's influence extends to the other storylines in the comic.
*Magi-Chan explains Sonichu's history and destiny to him. Among the information given:
::Sonichu's parents were gassed to death by Team Rocket's Koffing Pokemon.


==Comic pages==
==Comic pages==
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==Revisions==
==Revisions==
<center>
<center>
{| class="wikitable collapsible" width="600"
{| class="wikitable collapsible" width="600"
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|[[File:Sonichu 15 cover.jpg|120px|frameless|center|text-bottom]]
|[[File:Sonichu 15 cover.jpg|120px|frameless|center|text-bottom]]
|[[File:Sonichu15cover2019-min.png|120px|center]]
|[[File:Sonichu15cover2019-min.png|120px|center]]
|Originally, the cover did not credit Trickie or Rosechu's Story.<br>For the 2019 revision, Chris scribbled a note in the corner reading: "Also complimenting of Trickie's book, "Rosechu's Story", with permission to quote that book for this one."<br>An understatement to say the least, as most of the book's imagery and writing is copied directly from Rosechu's Story.
|The original cover did not credit Trickie or ''Rosechu's Story''.<br>For the 2019 revision, Chris scribbled a note in the corner reading: "Also complimenting of Trickie's book, "Rosechu's Story", with permission to quote that book for this one."
|-
|-
|1
|1
|[[File:SchuComic15Page1 draft.png|120px|frameless|center|text-bottom]]
|[[File:SchuComic15Page1 draft.png|120px|frameless|center|text-bottom]]
|[[File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p1.jpg|120px|center]]
|[[File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p1.jpg|120px|center]]
|In the original 2017 page, Chris drew the Raichu that becomes [[Rosechu]] with a blunt tail. (in Pokémon lore, a blunt tail signifies a Raichu is female while a pointed tail signifies it is male). He similarly drew its pre-evolved form, Pikachu, with a heart-shaped tail for the same reason. It was to be a retcon of [[Sonichu 0]], which depicted the Raichu with a pointed tail (as the Pokémon lore had not existed at the time).<br>However, later that year, [[Idea Guy]] told Chris that Rosechu was really born a male. When Chris returned to the comic in 2019, he followed Idea Guy's canon and revised the page to depict the Pikachu/Raichu with pointed tails (by drawing the tails on a separate page, cutting them out and gluing them over the original versions).
|[[Rosechu]]'s tail as a Raichu is blunt in the 2017 original to show she is a natural female; her tail as a Pikachu is heart-shaped for the same reason. (This itself [[continuity|retconned]] [[Sonichu 0]], which depicted the Raichu with a pointed tail because Nintendo did not draw male and female Raichus differently in [[2000]].) Chris's 2019, he followed Idea Guy's canon and revised the page to depict the Pikachu/Raichu with pointed tails (by drawing the tails on a separate page, cutting them out and gluing them over the original versions).
|-
|-
|9
|9
|[[File:SchuComic15Page9_draft.jpg|120px|frameless|center|text-bottom]]
|[[File:SchuComic15Page9_draft.jpg|120px|frameless|center|text-bottom]]
|[[File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p9.jpg|120px|center]]
|[[File:Sonichu15-2019draft-p9.jpg|120px|center]]
|Minor date change. The 2017 version gives 14 February 2003, as the date Rosechu and Sonichu meet; the 2019 version is revised to 7 February (with Chris writing the 7 on a slip of paper and gluing it over the previous date).
|Minor date change. The 2017 version gives 14 February 2003, as the date Rosechu and Sonichu meet; the 2019 version is revised to 7 February. Chris wrote the seven on a slip of paper and glued it over the previous date.
|}
</center>
<center>
{| class="wikitable collapsible" width="600"
|-
!Dialogue in ''Rosechu's Story''
!Revised in ''Sonichu'' 15
|-
|"Yeah, right"
|"Ch-yeah, right"
|-
|"another Pokemon like me just showing up at the door?"
|"another Pokemon for my rose just showing up at the door?"
|-
|"Woah"
|"Woahly"
|-
|"For the love of -"
|"For the love of Arceus!"
|-
|"Seriously, Kel?? You never once noticed my tail is pointed?!"
|"Seriously, Kel?? You never once noticed my tail is pointed?! Much less, my [[Pickle|wee-wee]]?"
|-
|"You sure put the little one through the wringer!"
|"You sure put the little on [sic] through the wringer! Her X-rays showed no fractured or broken bones at all."
|}
|}
</center>
</center>
==Gallery==
==Gallery==
<center><gallery>
<center><gallery>
CWC's Sonichu 15 vs Trickie's Rosechu's Story fancomic.png|Comparing art between ''Sonichu'' #15 and fan comic ''Rosechu's Story''.
CWC's Sonichu 15 vs Trickie's Rosechu's Story fancomic 2.png|An entire page is taken from ''Rosechu's Story'', down to the dialogue.
Chris pen grip 2019.jpg|Chris copying Rosechu's Story. Note the awkward pen grip + gym gloves hampering his drawing ability.
File:Trickiechu.jpg|"Trickiechu", a [[TSSSF]] card made by Chris, on the creator of ''Rosechu's Story''.
File:Trickiechu.jpg|"Trickiechu", a [[TSSSF]] card made by Chris, on the creator of ''Rosechu's Story''.
</gallery></center>
</gallery></center>

Revision as of 19:55, 9 April 2020

Well, that's pretty much what I expected.
Rosechu's Story creator Trickie, upon discovering that Chris ripped off her comic.[1]
Sonichu #15
Sonichu15cover2019-min.png
Cover Date: 16 October 2017
Finished: Superseded 17 December 2019
Page Count: 60
Episodes: 1
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Sonichu #15 was the seventeenth issue of Sonichu. It was announced by Chris on 17 October 2017, directly after he completed Sonichu #12. It was intended as a "Retelling of the Classic First Three Episodes, BUT with More Details; More Commentary and Dialogue from Sonichu and Rosechu".[2], but the bulk of its content was either plagiarised from Rosechu's Story, a Tumblr fan comic, or else devised by the Idea Guys. Its cover is an alternate version of the infamous "Zap to the extreme!" cover on Sonichu #0, with a transgender Chris directing Sonichu, who responds, "Yes, I will!! Thank you, mother!!!"; Chris believes that his art has improved in the thirteen years between the two books.[3] Work on the comic, after months of hiatus in mid-2019, came to an end on 17 December 2019 when Chris listed Rosechu's Story as TRUE and HONEST Sonichu canon at CWCVille Shopping, selling it beside Sonichu 0 through 13 and making Sonichu 15 the second instalment in the series (after Sonichu 16) to be abandoned while incomplete.

Sonichu mourning his parents' death.

For the most part, Chris adapted Rosechu's Story faithfully, occasionally revise dialogue to his taste. His most noteworthy change to the plot was in deciding to depict the Raichu with a blunt tail (in the Pokémon games, this marks a Raichu as female), even though Rosechu's Story's plot depended on Rosechu having been born male, in an obvious attempt to put his foot down on the much-debated and -ridiculed topic of Rosechu's birth gender. However, the Idea Guys convinced Chris that he was wrong and that Rosechu was really born male,[4] so Chris reversed his alteration in a 2019 revision. They also persuaded him that Sonichu's parents had been gassed to death by Team Rocket's coughing Pokémon.


Comic pages

Pages from Sonichu 15

Revisions

Sonichu #15 Version Comparison
Page Number 2017 Version 2019 Version Notes
Cover
Sonichu 15 cover.jpg
Sonichu15cover2019-min.png
The original cover did not credit Trickie or Rosechu's Story.
For the 2019 revision, Chris scribbled a note in the corner reading: "Also complimenting of Trickie's book, "Rosechu's Story", with permission to quote that book for this one."
1
SchuComic15Page1 draft.png
Sonichu15-2019draft-p1.jpg
Rosechu's tail as a Raichu is blunt in the 2017 original to show she is a natural female; her tail as a Pikachu is heart-shaped for the same reason. (This itself retconned Sonichu 0, which depicted the Raichu with a pointed tail because Nintendo did not draw male and female Raichus differently in 2000.) Chris's 2019, he followed Idea Guy's canon and revised the page to depict the Pikachu/Raichu with pointed tails (by drawing the tails on a separate page, cutting them out and gluing them over the original versions).
9
SchuComic15Page9 draft.jpg
Sonichu15-2019draft-p9.jpg
Minor date change. The 2017 version gives 14 February 2003, as the date Rosechu and Sonichu meet; the 2019 version is revised to 7 February. Chris wrote the seven on a slip of paper and glued it over the previous date.
Dialogue in Rosechu's Story Revised in Sonichu 15
"Yeah, right" "Ch-yeah, right"
"another Pokemon like me just showing up at the door?" "another Pokemon for my rose just showing up at the door?"
"Woah" "Woahly"
"For the love of -" "For the love of Arceus!"
"Seriously, Kel?? You never once noticed my tail is pointed?!" "Seriously, Kel?? You never once noticed my tail is pointed?! Much less, my wee-wee?"
"You sure put the little one through the wringer!" "You sure put the little on [sic] through the wringer! Her X-rays showed no fractured or broken bones at all."

Gallery

Sources